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SNOWBALL’S JOURNEY Whither we go, dandelion seeds, blown by a zephyr with toddler stature. Snowball’s journey will yield petaled weeds, but for now, we fly from the angel-dispatcher. Our cyclonic parachutes, sublime. Our flurry of seedlings put on a show. We float, we flap in long distance climb. Whither we go…whither we go! What wings arise, ascent of bees - Are they following our dandy cloud? Finding a new home, they freeze, hovering over the wild sowed. Laying down roots, we surrender, a flight of seedlings grow stems and buttery-yellow petals, tender to the toddlers, their mother’s gems. 6/3/2022 Flight Poetry Contest Sponsor: Chantelle Cooke RhymeZone used

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Date: 6/4/2022 4:49:00 PM
Beautifully written poem of nature's process. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2022 4:51:00 PM
Thank you. My muse took a break for a bit.
Date: 6/4/2022 12:19:00 AM
Outstanding poem Kim...It's amazing to see nature reveal it's colours! Amazing insightful thoughts! Have a great time!:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2022 6:06:00 AM
Thank you, Komal! :)
Date: 6/3/2022 10:51:00 PM
It's always lovely to see the seeds flying on the wind.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2022 6:06:00 AM
Yes it is! :)
Date: 6/3/2022 2:36:00 PM
Great pen Kim, full of fresh inspiration and insightfulness, really enjoyable read. Blessings,Gordon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2022 5:27:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 6/3/2022 6:41:00 AM
What a marvelous poem: Fantastic verses, profound ideas, and perfect imagery, my dearest friend, Kim! Be blessed!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2022 9:02:00 AM
Thank you, my sweet friend! I had fun writing this one! :)

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