Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

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Snowballs Journey

SNOWBALL’S JOURNEY

Whither we go, dandelion seeds,
blown by a zephyr with toddler stature.
Snowball’s journey will yield petaled weeds,
but for now, we fly from the angel-dispatcher.

Our cyclonic parachutes, sublime.
Our flurry of seedlings put on a show.
We float, we flap in long distance climb.
Whither we go…whither we go!

What wings arise, ascent of bees -
Are they following our dandy cloud?
Finding a new home, they freeze,
hovering over the wild sowed.

Laying down roots, we surrender,
a flight of seedlings grow stems
and buttery-yellow petals, tender
to the toddlers, their mother’s gems.

6/3/2022
Flight Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Chantelle Cooke
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Bill Baker June 4, 2022 at 4:49 PM Beautifully written poem of nature's process. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Bill Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2022 at 4:51 PM Thank you. My muse took a break for a bit.

Komal Walimbe June 4, 2022 at 12:19 AM Outstanding poem Kim...It's amazing to see nature reveal it's colours! Amazing insightful thoughts! Have a great time!:) Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2022 at 6:06 AM Thank you, Komal! :)

Victor Buhagiar June 3, 2022 at 10:51 PM It's always lovely to see the seeds flying on the wind. Kim Rodrigues June 4, 2022 at 6:06 AM Yes it is! :)

Gordon Mcconnell June 3, 2022 at 2:36 PM Great pen Kim, full of fresh inspiration and insightfulness, really enjoyable read. Blessings,Gordon Kim Rodrigues June 3, 2022 at 5:27 PM Thank you, my friend!

Demetrios Trifiatis June 3, 2022 at 6:41 AM What a marvelous poem: Fantastic verses, profound ideas, and perfect imagery, my dearest friend, Kim! Be blessed! Kim Rodrigues June 3, 2022 at 9:02 AM Thank you, my sweet friend! I had fun writing this one! :)