Snow Time

Bone chilling freeze covers this gray day.
Clouds accumulate granules that will soon fall
upon frosty lawns.  Silence abounds.
Where have all the birds gone as their bath sits frozen?
The honk of traveling Canadians breaks an empty mood.
Tree branches like feathered fans wave
against the gray sky monotony with breathtaking beauty.
Stark trees standing, awaiting the ice
that may crack their limbs.
Anticipation ... slowly, slowly
the air fills with wisps of white
and the flurries begin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/16/2009 5:06:00 AM
Sue, this reminds of another kind of wait, something more than existential, in simplicity you have opened depths. One love
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Date: 12/12/2009 7:06:00 AM
A touch of beauty...a touch of despair. Nice write. Love, daver
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Date: 12/11/2009 5:56:00 PM
AH Sue~I can see it now and almost smell winter to great job creating the true feeling of the approach of winter! Love Laura :)
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Date: 12/11/2009 5:15:00 PM
Hi Sue, well, I think I got you all topped, It's minus 5 today and expected to get even colder tonight. But the sky is clear and the stars are magificent. Love your poem, the fifth line especially, smile. Happy Holidays to you sweet. Thanks for your most welcome comments, it always makes my heart smile to get a comment from you. Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/11/2009 3:39:00 PM
We have a day just like this you have described so well in this beautiful poem. Brrrr.....yes indeed it is chilly in No. California! Stay warm Sue! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/11/2009 2:03:00 PM
tis the season to be freezing, it's finally here. john
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Date: 12/11/2009 1:44:00 PM
sounds cold and lonesome, hope the thaw comes soon! great write.
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Date: 12/11/2009 1:10:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, Sue.. and we are experiencing the bone chilling freeze in New Jersey today... 17 degrees and winds at 55 mph... brrrrrrrrr .. give me Summer any day ..365 in fact... thankxxx for your comments and u can check out my blog posted yesterday about the "goings on" recently surfaced... blessings... luv... happy holidays to u and your family... "Sweetie"
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