Snow Storm

blowing snow stings your eyes


people try hard to stay warm


cars will slide off the road



                                 P.R.Deremer

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Bl Devnath

Date: 3/23/2016 2:13:00 PM

Nice haiku my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Pam Deremer
Date: 3/23/2016 2:41:00 PM

Thank you.

Wilfred Aniagyei

Date: 10/27/2015 5:22:00 AM

Good one here, Pam...... No snow in my part of world, but I love the imagery....... Well done and thanks for the visit!

Diane Christian

Date: 10/17/2015 12:32:00 PM

lovely I love snow, not so keen on ice and slush but soft fluffy snow is cool and romantic. makes lovely scenery

Michael Tor

Date: 10/17/2015 1:38:00 AM

Were coming up on them Pam. Thanks for reminding me got to get those snow tires on. Nice write.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2015 3:56:00 PM

Yes, I know THESE days and hope to avoid them as much as possible this year!! You must know this time of the year well too.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/7/2015 6:22:00 PM

Dear Pam Lol don't want to think about this type of weather but wow a great poem about it when the time comes lol, I'm just not a wintery girl, I'm a sun worshiping gal, if you know what I mean, give me sunshine or give me hibernation, lol but well expressed and very inspiring for those whom love this time of year, and thanks for the review on my poems my friend I'm flattered and appreciate everyone of you here on the soup whom enjoy them, cheri

Pam Deremer
Date: 10/7/2015 6:33:00 PM

Thank you for the nice comment. I love snow and sunshine and all seasons. There is a different kind of beauty in each.

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