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Snow Smash

Wet and smashy snow Falls and melts upon landing Like sugar in tea

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Skat A

Date: 5/22/2016 5:26:00 PM

Ellen, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2015 11:36:00 AM

Ellen, stopping by again... a sweet imagery, however I would not drink it... LOL.. This haiku is cool...LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2015 9:43:00 PM

Ellen,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/8/2015 8:05:00 AM

- The year 2015 is new, and I look forward to many more poems from you - Welcome to P - Soup - Well done haiku, I enjoy reading your first poem, Ellen - // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/7/2015 5:50:00 PM

wonderful imagery:-) Hugs jan xx

David Meade

Date: 1/7/2015 1:08:00 PM

Sweet are your words -- I taste the winter in the tea. very well done.