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Snow Rain Snow

It snowed through the day Then through the evening The trees no longer bare Decorated with fluffy snow The bushes blanked All dressed in white coats Snowflakes fell all day Then through the evening The weather changed to rain It melted the snow that spread Turning brown grass to green The next day it snowed Covering the ground again The bare trees dressed-in snow Bushes once again coated white

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Date: 1/19/2021 1:24:00 AM
Sounds like this winter where I am.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/6/2021 3:34:00 PM
Hello M,L, Kiser, oh you have this type of winter weather! We now have snow that has remained on the ground. enjoyyour evening my friend.
Date: 12/23/2020 3:38:00 PM
Although I enjoyed this, I would have loved to see this piece in rhyme form. Such opposites in weather and emotions. A kind of nature dance captured well by your pen.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/24/2020 10:41:00 AM
Hello Rob Levasseur, Oh I never thought of that. I work on it. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. merry Christmas.
Date: 12/15/2020 11:18:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem Darlene. Weather is unpredictable, I guess that is what keeps weather persons employed.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/24/2020 10:43:00 AM
Hello Denis, yes the weather is un predictable. This is our weather. I love ir. The weatherman is wrong most of the time. Merry Christmas. happy New Year. enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 12/13/2020 10:35:00 AM
Well done Darlene. Love the visual. great write. Pete.
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Date: 12/13/2020 11:16:00 AM
Hello Peter thank you. Are you ready for Christmas? Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 12/8/2020 1:55:00 AM
Hi Darlene. Loved your snow rain snow. Definitely describes the weather we've had in Canada recently. Nicely written! :-)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/8/2020 5:56:00 AM
Hello Anne E. Sangster, yes we are having this type of weather today it is the same. i enjoy it. Thank you Anne for the nice comment. It is nice to meet someone from Canada .I live in Canada. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 12/6/2020 4:45:00 AM
Lots of changes! The snow is pretty!
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Date: 12/6/2020 5:54:00 AM
Hello Kim, yes Kim there a lot of changes, I do like this weather. I hope all is well with you.Any snow your way? Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 12/6/2020 1:01:00 AM
This is an excellent post and a wonderful poem, my dear sister of God's inspirational grace, Darlene. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message regarding snow and rain. The descriptive excellence is lovely and sends terrific images. The theme of "Love" stands out, and the tone and tenor move the piece down the page with much grace. Great job! Have a fantastic day, and God's richest grace and blessings always. https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/53812816-sincerely-speaking-spiritually.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/6/2020 5:57:00 AM
Hello Joseph Spencer Sr. I hope all is well with you Joseph. The weather here is strange. It snows , then rains, then snows. I di not mind this weather. God Bless you my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.
Date: 12/5/2020 5:01:00 PM
The cycle of winter. That is the way it is. Enjoyed this write. love phyl
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Date: 12/6/2020 5:58:00 AM
Hello Phylis, yes this is ths cycle of winter a tease before the storm comes. Thank you and enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 12/3/2020 2:58:00 PM
The cycle of change through such vivid imagery, Darlene!! Enjoy your day, friend!!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/3/2020 5:18:00 PM
Hello Newton Arch, yes a cycle changed indeed. It was four times it snowed. Then melted. I like this way. I am not a fan of winter. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 12/2/2020 3:59:00 PM
You don't happen to live in England do you. the weather changes every two minutes. Nice write. great visual. stay safe. Pete.
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Date: 12/3/2020 5:36:00 AM
Hello Peter, No Peter I live in Canada. The weather in England changes every 2 minutes! Wow! Are you ready for Christmas? Cheerio Darlene Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 11/30/2020 9:12:00 AM
Darlene enjoyed reading your Snow Rain Snow. Lovely imagery. Here, we don't experience much winter. Hope you enjoy the weather. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 11/30/2020 9:57:00 AM
Hello Anitha Jayasankar, Hello Anitha, where do you live? Tomorrow it will snow and the snow will stay. I never enjoy winter. I like summer the beat. In Canada we have 4 seasons. Summer, Fall, Winter, Spring. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
Date: 11/30/2020 7:43:00 AM
I suppose that's why refer to the season as "Old Man Winter" Can't remember it's supposed to be cold from one day to the next...
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/30/2020 9:59:00 AM
Hello Charlie Smith, yes that is why ir is called Old Man Winter. It is suppose to be cold from day 1. Lately we have been having mild weather. I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 11/28/2020 5:59:00 PM
The weather can't decide which one it like better, Nicely penned..
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/29/2020 10:39:00 AM
Hello Joseph May, right! Mother nature can not decidewhat to do. It is okay with me, i like this weather. enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 11/27/2020 6:20:00 AM
Weather seems bipolar my friend.. Hope it is better today..
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Date: 11/27/2020 10:28:00 AM
Hello Silent One, yes the weather is bipolar. I love this type of weather. It is the same. I am okay with this. I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 11/26/2020 3:48:00 PM
Like someone changing her mind about what color to paint her room! lol. ~ gw
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Date: 11/26/2020 4:13:00 PM
Hello Gershon, LOL! Yes like someone changing her mind about what color to paint a room. LOL.enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 11/26/2020 1:36:00 PM
Masterful verse Pangie xx Still Alive LOL
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Date: 11/26/2020 3:07:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, oh, thank you. I just wrote it today. Hwow was your Thanksgiving? Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo.
Date: 11/26/2020 10:32:00 AM
I love the way you give us the beauty scene by scent. These days we have so much more time to observe, and it is truly a blessings, if we can see the beauty in what we write about. Thank you for sharing your beautiful talented poem , blessings to you Darlene.
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Date: 11/26/2020 11:52:00 AM
Hello Pixie Dust, you are welcome my friend.Yes these days we have so much more to observe. Blessing to you my friend. Pixie. Enjoy your day my friend.

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