Snow Globe

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shaken not stirred causal whirlwind effect mini storm contained snow flurries mesmerize a microcosm spinning AP: 3rd place 2020 Posted April 6, 2020

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Julie Achilles

Date: 4/7/2020 10:18:00 AM

sweet that's all I can say- love a snow globe. Regards Julie

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/7/2020 1:16:00 PM

Thanks, Julie.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 4/6/2020 9:10:00 PM

Does it have an olive in it? I like this poem?

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 4/7/2020 6:56:00 PM

I really like the poem! I was throwing a little humor out there. Tell what is in the snow globe, vodka or gin?

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/6/2020 11:44:00 PM

So are you telling me that you like the poem but only if I'm actually referring to a martini? LOL

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/6/2020 1:28:00 PM

I like this Line. I have to admit I got a little dizzy in the whirlwind of your "mesmerizing" lines - a fun experience. Love watching snow falling either in a snow globe or from a window. Thanks for the lovely scenery!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/6/2020 11:45:00 PM

Thanks, Sam. Snow globes should come with signs that they should only be shaken... gently!