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Snow Globe

shaken not stirred
causal whirlwind effect
mini storm contained
snow flurries mesmerize
a microcosm spinning



AP: 3rd place 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Achilles Avatar
April 7, 2020 at 10:18 AM
sweet that's all I can say- love a snow globe. Regards Julie
Gauthier Avatar
April 7, 2020 at 1:16 PM
Thanks, Julie.
Mcguire Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 9:10 PM
Does it have an olive in it? I like this poem?
Mcguire Avatar
April 7, 2020 at 6:56 PM
I really like the poem! I was throwing a little humor out there. Tell what is in the snow globe, vodka or gin?
Gauthier Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 11:44 PM
So are you telling me that you like the poem but only if I'm actually referring to a martini? LOL
Kauffman Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 1:28 PM
I like this Line. I have to admit I got a little dizzy in the whirlwind of your "mesmerizing" lines - a fun experience. Love watching snow falling either in a snow globe or from a window. Thanks for the lovely scenery!
Gauthier Avatar
April 6, 2020 at 11:45 PM
Thanks, Sam. Snow globes should come with signs that they should only be shaken... gently!
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