Snow Footles

Snow Footles

Snow blow
White show

Cold nose
Froze toes

Snowman
Good plan

Snow whips
Nose drips

Snow bites
Nose wipes

Snow glare
Blind stare

Snow drifts
Car flips

Sun beams
Snow streams

Snow melt
Spring felt

Snow done
What fun!!



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Timperley Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 1:35 PM
Oh I love it so much, 'cept the flip bit, done that, was not happy. God bless. Dave.
Duncan Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 7:58 PM
I love this Debbie, ,,, happy valentine's day to you ;}
Clive Avatar
February 10, 2013 at 3:04 AM
Very timely. Congratulations Footles of fun! Charles.
Nair Avatar
February 10, 2013 at 1:17 AM
Congrats on the win!! Jag
A   Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 9:03 PM
Debra, Congratulations on a job well done, in Yasmin's footle fun contest:-) take care~PD
Merryman Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 6:59 PM
Debra, congrats on your 1st place win with these wintry footles! Love, Kim
Kendrick Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 4:25 PM
Great work..You are very good at doing these..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Ryerson Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 2:48 PM
'Snow done?'...Shucks!...I want more snow footles!...Great job Debra and congratulations as well - Tim
Gigno Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 11:55 AM
!!!
Guzzi Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 11:42 AM
Congrad's on your fun win, Deb. Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 11:03 AM
GOOD job, Debra. I knew this would score high. Congratulations to you.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 8:19 AM
Many congratulations Debs love em xx
Manassian Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 6:29 AM
AMAZING! I loved this delightful write! I've never tried to write a footle before, but you have inspired me! Thanks for your commnet on my poem! God bless! :)
Susan Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 8:14 AM
good ones! my fav is 'snow whips nose drips' I hate when that happens!
Horsman Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 4:14 AM
i'm really enjoying these footles, and yours Debra are no exception, good luck in contest...
Johnson Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 4:47 PM
Snodoze. hybernate.
Squyres Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 4:59 PM
That would be...Snow date/hybernate lol
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 3:09 PM
wow, you nailed the contest theme with some really nice footles and they all go together quite nicely for your snow poem. VERY nicely done.
Sivey Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 1:24 PM
This is a wonderful and delightful write my friend! I loved reading this amazing poem this afternoon! I enjoyed the lines, "Snow bites, Nose wipes" very awesome lines! What a inspiring piece, Great Work!!
Ellison Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 11:27 AM
Getting to like footies and yours are some of the best I've read! Hugs, Jack xox
Komala Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 8:11 AM
...very cute and lovely poem ..thank you dearest Poetess Debra..feel so fun and enjoyed your great poem...Hugs ...<3 :) Sk
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