Snow Flakes

first walk together
as snowflakes scatter and land
sprinkled on your cheeks

try to kiss them all 
they are melting on my lips
love covered in white





**SN*O*W** *HAIKU** contest by SKat.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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January 17, 2011 at 1:45 PM
no I don't know who that "dangerous ride" was with.. but the twist makes me wish. well .. lol.. comment to myself.. by the way.. another super wow! on your catching them snowflakes with the magic of the moment.. sweet~skat
Roberts Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 10:57 AM
beautiful and sweet, congrats on your win in the contest
Onclaud Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 6:24 AM
WHOOT!! congrats and thanks for your greetins too, michael! .. nette
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest...Sara
Neels Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 10:04 AM
Michael, congratulations on your great win in Irma's contest ;-) love Wilma
Freeman Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations Michael on your worthy poem's recognition. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 8:44 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win of Skat's contest, Michael
Harper Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 8:02 AM
Still enjoy this, congrats on your win, love covered in white is fun!
Richards Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 7:54 AM
nice ones........each one is a bit of romance in three little lines! :) Congratulations!!
A   Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 7:38 AM
Good morning, Micahel) Congratulations! With your awesome entry! Enjoyed the chills here in this snowy contest,...p.d.
Brown Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 4:04 AM
Big congratulations on your win Michael in S K A T*s contest. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 1:03 AM
great stuff, michael.. congrats on the win!!
Cwiak Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 9:26 PM
Love covered in white is such a great line, Michael. Congrats to you on your win in the contest. Dan C
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 8:51 PM
Most romantic ones I've read on the list. Awesome, Michael and congratulations.
A  Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 8:46 PM
Michael, Many congratulations, in my contest, truly I loved it, and thanks for the awesome entry*luv~SKAT
Sweetheart Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 8:39 PM
Congrats my White Knight of P.S. on your big win in the Snow contest with this super write luv.. enjoy tonight my friend.. your Jersey Girl forever.
A   Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 8:02 PM
As for me Michale, i love the cold ice melting in my on my tongue. The sad part is i have to melt ice cubes in my mouth,,lol,, We don't get snow here in south Texas.. okay maybe once in a lifetime. But, i have seen it plenty of times,.~good luck~.p..d
Harper Avatar
November 28, 2010 at 9:09 PM
Very sweet and beautiful, good luck!
Ruebel Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 12:27 PM
Oh Michael, I feel the love in the air. This is wonderful As Always, Shar
A  Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 11:33 AM
Hi, M.J. stopping real quick 2 say thanks 4 the comment. Also thanxs 4 this fine entry. I only peeked. Have a nice day*luv~SKAT
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November 27, 2010 at 9:13 AM
Romance seems to spring from the snowfall, Michael. A terrific entry for the snow contest! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
La France Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 9:04 AM
This is so sweet and loving and special and wonderful and well I just love it, best of luck in the contest~~
Sweetheart Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 6:05 AM
Oh how very romantic Michael... only my W.K. could take Snow Flakes and make them sexy luv.. and we picked the same theme to write about..how cool is that luv? thankxx for your prayers and concern.. Ron is in hospital ..will be out by Tuesday if he keeps up such good progress luv.. appreciate so much.. good luck in Irma's contest luv.. it will be a top winner for sure.. after all ..romance is always a top winner my friend.. happy weekend with luv..from your forever J.G...luv.
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November 27, 2010 at 5:24 AM
Enjoyed this romantic work...I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Good luck in the contest with this excellent work...I was delighted that you stopped by my work..Sara
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