Snow Flake and Leaf Adventure - Haiku

Snow Flake And Leaf Adventure - Haiku

Snow flake lands on leaf
Both fall to river raging
Spin past rocks, dizzy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A. Sharma Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 6:22 AM
Lovely haiku Earl ! I can relate to this great work of yours!
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November 3, 2014 at 8:33 AM
Hi Dr. Sharma, Thank you for your interest and kind words. I appreciate it. Take care. Earl
Gorelick Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:14 PM
I spend some time each year near a swift flowing creek, have seen this and it does make you kind of dizzy..wonderful poem. BG
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November 3, 2014 at 8:36 AM
Hi Barbara, Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It is one of those wonders of nature worth reflecting on. Take care. Earl
Meade Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 7:53 PM
The fleeting life of snow flake and leaf -- I felt the speed of the haiku -- great poem.
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November 3, 2014 at 8:39 AM
Hi David, Thank you so much for your kind words and interest. It is good that nature can carry us away sometimes to a better place. Have a great day. Earl
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