Snow Filled

Gray clouds that look like they could be snow filled
Fields of cotton that looks whiter than snow
Some fields have been harvested_gleaned and cleaned
Some that have had plow turn them_now wait
Those fields will be replanted with what crop
And exactly when is left to farmer
Fields white unto harvest my friend a good crop

Just writing for fun.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 6:56 PM
nothing smells as good as a freshly plowed field! Light & Love
Lamoureux Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 7:18 AM
Your fun is our pleasure. You have painted a lovely picture Sara.
Onclaud Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 7:19 PM
charmed by this lilting gidt, sara.. sounds like a fine bounty.. so wonderfully scribed!..:) huggs!
Yamin Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 5:18 PM
Most enchanting poem with a profound message. I admire the light veil through which filters a great message. I am a great admirer of the beauty of your writings. Thanks for your thought provoking comments on my Tanka Test of Love. Your comments are filled with vision and wisdom. No doubt old age divulges the true meaning of love in all its depth and quality. It is indeed a new dawn, Sara. Have a nice day. -Mohammad
Horsman Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 3:24 PM
a scene i'm not familar with Sara, thanks for sharing with me...
O'Leary Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 3:17 PM
The weather here's been rather dreary... your 'whiteness' has brightened my day... Thanks... Terry
Horne Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 2:06 PM
love this, my friend - I could 'see' those white fields of cotton : )
Williams Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 12:27 PM
Sara you make the cold feel warm...David
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 11:07 AM
...... When the snow gets wet ..... so cold ... .... your cotton snow sound soft and warm, Sara - Lovely written. - Have a wonderful day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Sivey Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 10:58 AM
The superior write that I have read is so great I loved every word of it my friend! You have delighted me to no end with this tremendous piece! What a fantastic poem, Awesome Work!!
Poet Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 10:21 AM
Beautiful verse here Sara.Lovely read.
Carrillo Avatar
November 20, 2012 at 8:22 AM
Sara; I like this. Fields of cotton that look whiter than snow. How can I forget that. When I was real young, I worked in the cotton fields. this brings back memories. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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