Snow Falls On the Lake

snow falls on the lake
stars of ice returning home....
winter's renewal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mumtaz Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 5:18 PM
Nice! Simple yet meaningful. I would like to invite you to read my poem 'The White Snow'. I would appreciate your comments. Love
Fraser Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 1:18 PM
Seasonal bliss in your words Deb....:)
A   Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 6:03 AM
lovely and blissful write, enjoyed,..p.d.
Duffin Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 5:05 AM
Hi Deb. Great imagery here. Love the idea that life is a circle, lake to cloud to ice, on and on. I don't come from farming stock but fishing. When I was young (12) I was sent to work with the farmers until I was strong enough for fishing, so have experience of both. Thanks for your interest and kind comments. Eamon
Mehta Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 1:12 PM
Nice images to creat a pleasing picture of the winter's renewal. Good luck, deb
Falotico Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 5:46 AM
Nice desriptive Haiku on winter taking control....always enjoy your Poetry my dear....love Michael
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