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Snow Falls

snow falls b r e a t h l e s s l y the last roses of autumn e x h a l e Written 10/24/12 For Joann Grisetti's Gogyoka Poetry Contest

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Harry Horsman

Date: 12/27/2012 10:08:00 AM

back here again with this beauty.. cannot view your other pages only page one....See my blog...

George Zamalea

Date: 11/11/2012 7:21:00 PM

I read this poem and it super. Keep on. By the way, congratulations. And thank you for your comments.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/10/2012 5:51:00 PM

Andrea, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/9/2012 1:56:00 AM

Congratulations Andy, I think gail meant 'no surprise' love this one xx

Tanya Harrington

Date: 11/8/2012 2:44:00 PM

Love, love it! Congrats :) Tanya

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/8/2012 10:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 11/8/2012 5:51:00 AM

Congrats, Andea, for your tot win:) Jag

S.Jagathsimhan Nair
Date: 11/8/2012 5:51:00 AM

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Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 11/8/2012 1:41:00 AM

Beautifully stated Andrea! Congrats on your win!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/7/2012 9:49:00 PM

This is beautiful. Many congrats for this win Andrea. Thanks for all the lovely comments on mine.

Len Gasun

Date: 11/7/2012 8:14:00 PM

MY BIGGEST HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR GRAND WIN MY DEAR FRIEND ANDREA! CHEERS MY FRIEND! THANKS FOR YOUR CONGRATULATORY COMMENTS TO0. I'M SO SAD, I DON'T HAVE MUCH TIME IN PS THIS WEEK AND CAN'T GO AND CONGRATULATE OTHER WINNERS 'COZ MY PC ISN'T WITH ME. I'LL TRY TO CATCH UP MAYBE NX WK. AGAIN MILLION THANKS! love/hugs, LG

Heather Ober

Date: 11/7/2012 7:56:00 PM

I LOVE this! The imagery and personification are just wonderful. Congrats on the well-deserved win :)

Joann Grisetti

Date: 11/7/2012 5:19:00 PM

Beautiful - congratulations.

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 11/6/2012 1:18:00 PM

An elegant Tanka. Simple yet impressive. I am glad you like my Haiku Buried Hearts. Thanks. I am sure soup team will salvage your member area and your mail. Just be patient. Love. -Mohammad

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/30/2012 2:17:00 PM

Had to read this one again. Lovely poem. love phyl

Darrel Smith

Date: 10/28/2012 6:05:00 PM

i like this

Daver Austin

Date: 10/28/2012 11:19:00 AM

Beautiful. I noticed three white roses on our back yard bush this morning. They looked so fresh in the cold. The pinks were drooping. LOve, daver

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/28/2012 6:36:00 AM

Great poetry Andrea. Love the way you write!! Hugs n luv Michael

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/27/2012 5:45:00 PM

Awesome Andrea! Heck, that should be your nick name! This is indeed breathtaking.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/27/2012 2:11:00 PM

Yes that darn white stuff came early and we don't want it around. Love you poem. love phyl

Irfana Ali Bhat

Date: 10/27/2012 11:23:00 AM

this is amazing....so much said in so few words...loved it Andrea....xxxxx...:))

Len Gasun

Date: 10/27/2012 10:55:00 AM

Your tanka shows a very wonderful picture giving me a great vicarious experience of snow falls time/season my dear friend! Good luck and best wishes in the contest! love, Leonora

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/27/2012 8:09:00 AM

...and then I frantically run home to cut the final buds of this year to proudly (and sadly) display them on my kitchen table...Gosh, I didn't know you felt this way too!!!! Nice work, Andrea!....Soup Mail....

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/27/2012 6:54:00 AM

I love the poem and how you used the size of the font too create the mood. Well done.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/26/2012 8:03:00 PM

Andrea, thank you for stopping and saying hi,,it is very nice of you. I know you are a busy lady... thanks... and I love your little tanka... always...pd

Ann Roske

Date: 10/26/2012 11:55:00 AM

a beautiful picture Andrea - loved this piece