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Snow day

pearly tears tumble from a dolphin grey sky a frozen morning modern haiku, less than 17 syllables

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/1/2011 12:36:00 AM
Love that line Dolphin grey!!
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Date: 12/30/2010 6:00:00 PM
Eiken..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.
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Date: 12/30/2010 2:22:00 PM
Enjoyed this one...My brain automaticly compared Dolphin Gray to a sky that would release snow..Good one...I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..Sara
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:43:00 AM
Nice images to piant a snowy day, Eiken
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Date: 12/30/2010 3:42:00 AM
Well done, vivid imagery in a few words.
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