Snow Day

pearly tears tumble

from a dolphin grey sky

a frozen morning

modern haiku, less than 17 syllables
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 12:36 AM
Love that line Dolphin grey!!
A   Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 6:00 PM
Eiken..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.
Kendrick Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 2:22 PM
Enjoyed this one...My brain automaticly compared Dolphin Gray to a sky that would release snow..Good one...I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..Sara
Mehta Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 5:43 AM
Nice images to piant a snowy day, Eiken
Nutter Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 3:42 AM
Well done, vivid imagery in a few words.
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