Alexis Y. Poet Haiku

Snow Dance

snow waltz's from the sky

balsam firs are dressed in white~

swan glides on a pond





*Balsam Fir- Is a type of Christmas Tree

12/16/19
Contest:December - Winter Haiku or Senryu

Sponsor:Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Eve Roper December 26, 2019 at 6:49 PM Congratulations on your very descriptive win! Hugs Eve

Constance La France December 26, 2019 at 5:31 PM Alexis congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your beautiful haiku ~

Peter W Iversen December 26, 2019 at 9:47 AM Like the calm feel, congrats-Peter

Anne-Lise Andresen December 25, 2019 at 2:33 PM - Congratulations, with your winning poem - Marry Christmas and Happy New Year, Alexis :) - Greetings from // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich December 24, 2019 at 5:20 PM such a beautiful picture you created. Congrats and a very merry Christmas, Alexis. (I am in contact with Jan. I hope you have heard from her. She came around here the other day I think) Alexis Y. December 24, 2019 at 5:48 PM Thank you so much. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year I am in contact with Jan:-)Alexis

Sam Kauffman December 24, 2019 at 12:14 PM Hi Alexis, Congratulations on your win. You have really captured the feeling of a winter scene. Very nice.

Freddie Robinson Jr. December 19, 2019 at 1:35 PM Beautiful haiku, Lexi! Balsam fir is draped around this luscious poem. Love and peace forever.

Gershon Wolf December 18, 2019 at 3:44 PM This is a lovely dance, indeed! Great entry for the contest. Good luck, Alexis! :) gw

Sandra Adams December 17, 2019 at 9:04 PM i love this...just was watching a swan swimming the other day...i could see this whole scene unfolding... beautiful Alexis :) hugs

Vijay Pandit December 17, 2019 at 3:39 PM Excellent imagery you captured Alexis in sights and sounds of winter--beautifully done. All the best.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 17, 2019 at 1:54 PM - A beautiful picture painted with snow, Alexis :) - I wish you and your loved ones a wonderful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May December 17, 2019 at 12:50 PM I am not sure if i like this, I LOVE IT, great job sweet sis!!

Demetrios Trifiatis December 17, 2019 at 11:31 AM A diamond of a Haiku dearest, Alexis. Hugs xxx

Caren Krutsinger December 17, 2019 at 10:54 AM Very pretty! Merry Christmas my friend.

Heidi Sands December 17, 2019 at 10:30 AM Absolutely beautiful Alexis :)

Tom Cunningham December 17, 2019 at 10:11 AM Love the image Alexis,. Good luck Tom

Na Na December 17, 2019 at 10:01 AM beautiful imagery thanks for sharing. Best of luck in the contest