Snow Cone

Tongue purple not red
Painful pulse pounding my head
Should have sipped instead

By Robb A. Kopp
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 23, 2010 at 8:35 AM
Brain Freeze oh no but an awesome Senryu Robb. Have a wonderful weekend and keep the ink flowing. Love, Carol
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