Snow Complaining

It is hard to be a Flake
Melting under pressure
Turning to slush

Good for nothing
But to slip
Some one up

Grimy and gross
Ground under boots
Everyone treads on me just because I can't stand the heat!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jordan Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 6:27 PM
Autumn very cleaver poem - Made me chuckle - God Bless, MJ
Richards Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 5:56 PM
A cute poem, I love the personification used....that poor snowflake!! :( ~ Carrie
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