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Snow Complaining

It is hard to be a Flake
Melting under pressure
Turning to slush

Good for nothing
But to slip
Some one up

Grimy and gross
Ground under boots
Everyone treads on me just because I can't stand the heat!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/1/2008 6:27:00 PM
Autumn very cleaver poem - Made me chuckle - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/1/2008 5:56:00 PM
A cute poem, I love the personification used....that poor snowflake!! :( ~ Carrie
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