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Snow Angels

Here I lie in the solace of my bed Wrapped up in these sheets of grey Looking out past the frosted glass Out into the pitch dark of night Oh the white puffs falling down Little cotton balls so fluffy So pure Blanketing the barren ground Brightening up the darkened night Remembering our time together those little snow ball fights you putting snow down my back you're first snow angel How I want those days back Here I lie in the solace of my bed wondering could you? would you? Still be mine I know it feels right Only time will tell if you'll be my snow angel

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/11/2015 1:54:00 PM
That is beautiful! You love your Snow Angel. Hugs, Alicia
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Tim Smith
Date: 2/11/2015 1:59:00 PM
Yes...I do love her
Date: 12/10/2014 9:24:00 AM
It reminds us about the recently seen movies Avatar and its special effects,especially the image in which the main character entered in a kind of superior world of strange blue beings...and kind of white flakes (coming from a sacred tree) gather round about him as attracted by purity and innocence.Well it`s a very poetical image and your poetry has also other wonders.Life a little a bit different...but you know the Man who brings the rain...
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Date: 12/3/2014 2:28:00 AM
This brought back memories of making snow angels when I was a kid... I really enjoyed this romantic story in a winter setting. Wonderful imagery, Tim!
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Date: 12/3/2014 3:54:00 AM
Thank you Kelly...hugs Tim
Date: 11/22/2014 12:31:00 AM
That's an understatement, No global warming here!!!!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/22/2014 12:37:00 AM
I'm writing with Charma under Cupids Arrow if you want to take a peek...cheers
Date: 11/22/2014 12:26:00 AM
Very romantic, worked for me I must say I met an ice queen, ok maybe not exactly the same, but close! cheers
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/22/2014 12:30:00 AM
Heard she was frigid
Date: 11/13/2014 11:55:00 AM
really beautifully painted piece tim excellent pen
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Date: 11/12/2014 10:32:00 PM
Great imaginative write with unique imagery.
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Date: 11/12/2014 3:51:00 PM
love what you commented to me about that foul tasting kimchi. OMG, grossest food ever. HOw a population can stand it just really astounds me. Well, I probably would be the one Korean not to like it. I also do not eat ham or pork. My whole family loves it (as well as most americans) but I just hate that meat!
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Date: 11/12/2014 1:18:00 PM
Back to read this, and I see my first comment didn't go through :( Well I say I would love to have a snowball fight with you! :) anytime :)
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Date: 11/12/2014 10:09:00 AM
I was trying to sleep today (night duty), and it was 40°c outside, made for a hot house. So I liked the thought of reading a snow poem. And what a great choice I made, while the title read cool, the words would warm the coldest winters day. A pleasure to read.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2014 11:23:00 AM
Today is -2 C ...so if you want to trade places....I also work the night shift...cheers
Date: 11/12/2014 8:19:00 AM
I really enjoy this ,Tim; Kudos! Huggs
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2014 11:21:00 AM
Thank you my friend... Cheers
Date: 11/12/2014 7:16:00 AM
What a fantastic verse: Gentle, soothing, a lullaby for the heart! Excellent dear friend, Tim!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2014 11:20:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios my dear friend
Date: 11/12/2014 4:58:00 AM
Nice and romantic piece Tim! Enjoyed it. :) Love and light! xxxD
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Date: 11/12/2014 11:20:00 AM
Thank you Dorian... Hugs Tim
Date: 11/12/2014 2:20:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2014 3:50:00 AM
Thank you Ravi my friend.
Date: 11/12/2014 12:32:00 AM
Tim, wonderfully romantic winter wonderland.. The snow is an amazing backdrop for love!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2014 3:50:00 AM
That first snow is always beautiful Dave
Date: 11/11/2014 11:55:00 PM
Sigh!This is so romantic and beautiful. I love to do my first snow angel,play snowball fights,I love the snow as much as a little kid does :.)It s brightness reminds me of all that is beautiful,like this poem.I love both the imagery and feeling it transmits...Wow! Going to my favourites ,Tim-Charma.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2014 11:19:00 AM
:)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/12/2014 6:53:00 AM
Oki so everyone must wear as an eskimo : )lol
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/12/2014 3:49:00 AM
Make them with the kids all the time...they like when I make an igloo too :)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/12/2014 3:11:00 AM
Can we have a snowman with a carrot nose ,hat and scarf too? : )
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/11/2014 11:57:00 PM
; )
Date: 11/11/2014 10:43:00 PM
May the magic of the snow angle bring you love and joy! Well done my friend!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/11/2014 11:17:00 PM
Thank you David...cheers Tim
Date: 11/11/2014 8:03:00 PM
aww what a delightful romantic write with fabulous imagery:-) Its a fave from me:-) hugs jan x
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/11/2014 8:05:00 PM
Thank You Jan my dear friend ...hugs Tim