Snow Angels

Here I lie in the solace of my bed Wrapped up in these sheets of grey Looking out past the frosted glass Out into the pitch dark of night Oh the white puffs falling down Little cotton balls so fluffy So pure Blanketing the barren ground Brightening up the darkened night Remembering our time together those little snow ball fights you putting snow down my back you're first snow angel How I want those days back Here I lie in the solace of my bed wondering could you? would you? Still be mine I know it feels right Only time will tell if you'll be my snow angel
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ward Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 1:54 PM
That is beautiful! You love your Snow Angel. Hugs, Alicia
Smith Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 1:59 PM
Yes...I do love her
Bocsa Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 9:24 AM
It reminds us about the recently seen movies Avatar and its special effects,especially the image in which the main character entered in a kind of superior world of strange blue beings...and kind of white flakes (coming from a sacred tree) gather round about him as attracted by purity and innocence.Well it`s a very poetical image and your poetry has also other wonders.Life a little a bit different...but you know the Man who brings the rain...
Deschler Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 2:28 AM
This brought back memories of making snow angels when I was a kid... I really enjoyed this romantic story in a winter setting. Wonderful imagery, Tim!
Smith Avatar
December 3, 2014 at 3:54 AM
Thank you Kelly...hugs Tim
Vaso Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 12:31 AM
That's an understatement, No global warming here!!!!
Smith Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 12:37 AM
I'm writing with Charma under Cupids Arrow if you want to take a peek...cheers
Vaso Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 12:26 AM
Very romantic, worked for me I must say I met an ice queen, ok maybe not exactly the same, but close! cheers
Smith Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 12:30 AM
Heard she was frigid
Mcdaid Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 11:55 AM
really beautifully painted piece tim excellent pen
Yvonne Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 10:32 PM
Great imaginative write with unique imagery.
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 3:51 PM
love what you commented to me about that foul tasting kimchi. OMG, grossest food ever. HOw a population can stand it just really astounds me. Well, I probably would be the one Korean not to like it. I also do not eat ham or pork. My whole family loves it (as well as most americans) but I just hate that meat!
Nance Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 1:18 PM
Back to read this, and I see my first comment didn't go through :( Well I say I would love to have a snowball fight with you! :) anytime :)
Thirtyseven Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 10:09 AM
I was trying to sleep today (night duty), and it was 40°c outside, made for a hot house. So I liked the thought of reading a snow poem. And what a great choice I made, while the title read cool, the words would warm the coldest winters day. A pleasure to read.
Smith Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 11:23 AM
Today is -2 C ...so if you want to trade places....I also work the night shift...cheers
Kayode Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 8:19 AM
I really enjoy this ,Tim; Kudos! Huggs
Smith Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 11:21 AM
Thank you my friend... Cheers
Trifiatis Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 7:16 AM
What a fantastic verse: Gentle, soothing, a lullaby for the heart! Excellent dear friend, Tim!
Smith Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 11:20 AM
Thank you Demetrios my dear friend
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 4:58 AM
Nice and romantic piece Tim! Enjoyed it. :) Love and light! xxxD
Smith Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 11:20 AM
Thank you Dorian... Hugs Tim
Sathasivam Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 2:20 AM
Excellent. Lovely romantic write. Enjoyed. Tfs
Smith Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 3:50 AM
Thank you Ravi my friend.
Chircop Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 11:55 PM
Sigh!This is so romantic and beautiful. I love to do my first snow angel,play snowball fights,I love the snow as much as a little kid does :.)It s brightness reminds me of all that is beautiful,like this poem.I love both the imagery and feeling it transmits...Wow! Going to my favourites ,Tim-Charma.
Smith Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 11:19 AM
:)
Chircop Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 6:53 AM
Oki so everyone must wear as an eskimo : )lol
Smith Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 3:49 AM
Make them with the kids all the time...they like when I make an igloo too :)
Chircop Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 3:11 AM
Can we have a snowman with a carrot nose ,hat and scarf too? : )
Chircop Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 11:57 PM
; )
Meade Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 10:43 PM
May the magic of the snow angle bring you love and joy! Well done my friend!
Smith Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 11:17 PM
Thank you David...cheers Tim
Allison Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 8:03 PM
aww what a delightful romantic write with fabulous imagery:-) Its a fave from me:-) hugs jan x
Smith Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 8:05 PM
Thank You Jan my dear friend ...hugs Tim
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