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Snow - Angel

tiny snow angel
snowflakes kiss your rosy cheeks
white winter beauty

Any poem you ever wrote not for a contest
Sponsored by Broken Wings
14th November 2014
Published in Haiku Journal #33 by Prolific Press

winterhaiku

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Paul Marc

February 14, 2019 at 6:33 PM

Snow flakes are like angels ~ I love it! Beautiful haiku Jan :)

Jan Allison

February 14, 2019 at 6:35 PM

thanks PM:-) hugs Jan xx

Valerie Staton

January 25, 2019 at 8:37 AM

Very nicely written!

Jan Allison

February 14, 2019 at 6:34 PM

thanks Valerie:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman

July 14, 2016 at 9:04 PM

An excellent write, Jan! Your words match the picture perfectly. Congrats on your win!

Jan Allison

April 9, 2017 at 7:44 PM

Thanks so much Kim sorry I missed replying before!:-( hugs Jan xx

John Lawless

July 14, 2016 at 5:17 PM

Great Haiku Jan. I used to make snow devils....

Jan Allison

July 14, 2016 at 5:21 PM

ha ha ha John I love that comment:-) hugs Jan xx

Carol Eastman

July 14, 2016 at 9:42 AM

I really LOVED that picture to go with it. Congratulations on the win.

Jan Allison

July 14, 2016 at 5:20 PM

Thanks Carol I love the picture too:-) hugs jan xx

Janis Medders Tobechi

July 13, 2016 at 2:12 PM

Congratulations, Jan

Jan Allison

July 13, 2016 at 3:11 PM

Thanks Janis:-) hugs Jan xx

Funom Makama

November 24, 2014 at 9:37 AM

Nice poem. Excellent share and you gave me an inspiring read. Thanks for blessing us with your creativity.

Jan Allison

November 24, 2014 at 11:03 AM

Thanks so much Funom:-) hugs jan xx

S.D. Tiwari

November 23, 2014 at 4:36 AM

Nice haiku, Jan

Jan Allison

November 23, 2014 at 4:38 AM

thanks so much for the comment S D :-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser

November 17, 2014 at 5:09 PM

I find this piece, extremely romantic. It's the scene I'd like to be in, with someone so close. Love it Jan, dreamy Haiku, James :)

Jan Allison

November 17, 2014 at 5:11 PM

Thank you so much James for your glowing comment:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

November 17, 2014 at 4:11 PM

I think all your poetry is brilliant. Your Haiku goes one step beyond that. Fav.

Jan Allison

November 17, 2014 at 4:15 PM

Aww Maurice you are so so generous in your praise thank you:-) Hugs Jan xx

Matthew Anish

November 16, 2014 at 7:31 PM

You stuck to the 5 7 5 form which is all to the good! I enjoyed your winter haiku! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jan Allison

November 17, 2014 at 1:01 AM

Thanks so much Matthew:-) Hugs Jan xx

Darlene Gifford

November 16, 2014 at 8:16 AM

I can feel the cold kiss of snow on my cheeks. A delightful Haiku, Jan. A 7 and a sav for me. And thanks for visiting my poem this morning. Blessings, Darlene

Jan Allison

November 16, 2014 at 8:56 AM

Thanks so much Darlene:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 15, 2014 at 12:49 PM

- Lovely snow haiku Jan !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

November 15, 2014 at 12:59 PM

Thanks so much Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan x

Adell Foster

November 15, 2014 at 12:24 PM

I love the imagery of this piece, it brought back memories for this reader indeed. So much beauty expressed within this haiku. Thank you for sharing the read and for your lovely comments on "Welcome Back Child". God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Jan Allison

November 15, 2014 at 12:37 PM

Thanks so much Adell:-) Hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick

November 15, 2014 at 5:50 AM

A snowy day?...Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for the visit..I would like chocolate in my chili I am sure but don't know about the rest of the family..Cinnamon just a dash adds to the flavor as well..Sara

Jan Allison

November 15, 2014 at 6:32 AM

thanks for dropping by Sara - you cant actually taste the chocolate in the chilli - just gives it a dark richness to it:-) hugs Jan x

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 14, 2014 at 11:40 PM

Winter personified-snow-white-great imagery..A fav XXXX Love Jan XXX RAJAT

Jan Allison

November 15, 2014 at 3:21 AM

Thanks so much Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dorian Petersen Potter

November 14, 2014 at 11:28 PM

Very lovely! Enjoyed your haiku Jan. I could almost see your tiny Angels in front of me while reading it. A 7 for me! :) love and light! xxx D.

Jan Allison

November 15, 2014 at 3:20 AM

Thank you so much Dorian:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

November 14, 2014 at 6:30 PM

Such a pretty picture you have brush stroked on my mind.

Jan Allison

November 14, 2014 at 6:48 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment Richard:-) hugs Jan xx

Frederic Parker

November 14, 2014 at 5:56 PM

You have captured the pretty side of winter with your Haiku..my homestate gets plenty of snow..the state I live in now they call sunshine state

Jan Allison

November 14, 2014 at 6:09 PM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Frederic:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

November 14, 2014 at 4:49 PM

Lovely haiku, Jan. I can only imagine...we do not get snow in Malta. hugs // paul

Jan Allison

November 14, 2014 at 4:53 PM

Thankfully we rarely get it Paul - it is lovely on Christmas cards but the reality of the chaos it can cause was found in the Island in 2012 when in the North they had an unusual amount - drifts of up to 10 foot any many livestock sadly perished:-( Hugs jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

November 14, 2014 at 3:59 PM

Im going to make my first snow angel with Christina in kent(Rochester or Canterbury)..Is there snow at the moment?How beautiful this is Favouring if.I just told a friend he should try get his haiku published.I believe this can make irt too. If you ll be interested the email is www.haikujournal.com or .org ..There is a site profilic press..you can get more info..Hugs..Tmfvs

Jan Allison

November 14, 2014 at 4:02 PM

Thanks Chramaine I was thinking of posting some when you mentioned it before - maybe its time now:-) Hugs Jan No snow forecast for the next 2 weeks there as far as the long range forecast shows - sorry:-(

Tim Smith

November 14, 2014 at 3:09 PM

Mine ran in off the school bus in shorts...snow, cold, kids and fashion....excellent Jan...hugs Tim

Tim Smith

November 14, 2014 at 3:15 PM

No not in public schools

Jan Allison

November 14, 2014 at 3:14 PM

LOL - kids eh - Don't they have school uniform in the schools then? Hugs Jan xx

David Meade

November 14, 2014 at 2:49 PM

Yes, yes . . . I like this a lot . . . little children with bright red cheeks and squeals of delightful laughter -- snow everywhere . . . a warm happiness is this haiku. Nicely done

Jan Allison

November 14, 2014 at 2:57 PM

Thanks David for the lovely comment:-) Hugs jan xx