Snow Angel

Snow Angel


headlong into clouds

babe dug tunnels in the snow

smiling from heaven



……a day like today….. sun reflecting off the icy snow, about 5-below-zero….my animal best 
friend (Golden Retriever)  “Babe Ruth”  thought he was in heaven on earth!....now he’s in 
heaven smiling…

11/27/10
9:55 am
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Ray Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 5:46 PM
loved this memory....the snow!!! i lived in Fergus Falls and do i ever remember the pile of snow!!! thanks....
Roberts Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 11:02 AM
wonderful memory you've penned, congrats on your win in the contest
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 9:28 AM
Good one..Congratulations..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 8:59 PM
oh, wow, I am so happy to see I inspired you to tweak it. I just love it with clouds!!! and now I am gonna have to fav it!!
Neels Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 10:31 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win with this gem James ;-) enjoyed reading it again
Freeman Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 9:00 AM
Congratulations James on your worthy poem's recognition. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in skat's contest, Jimbo
Harper Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 8:29 AM
I love this, the fun of play changing clouds to heaven, excellent, congrats on your win:)
A   Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 7:43 AM
James) Congratulations! With your awesome entry! Enjoyed the chills here in this snowy contest,...p.d.
Bloomsfield Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 7:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS WITH THIS GEM,MY DEAR DEAR FRIEND ,How are you?HOPE FINE !
Brown Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 4:08 AM
Big congratulations on your win James in S K A T*s contest. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 8:57 PM
This is wonderful because I can imagine him running through the clouds which resemble the snowdrifts. Love it. Cngratulations!
A  Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 8:52 PM
James, Many congratulations, in my contest, truly I loved it, and thanks for the awesome entry*luv~SKAT
Sweetheart Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 8:45 PM
Congrats Jimbo on your big win in the Snow contest with this super write my friend.. enjoy with luv tonight ...
Milgate Avatar
November 28, 2010 at 10:38 AM
What a special tribute to a very special companion. Some dogs make the best people.
M V Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 10:31 PM
Powerful image to convey powerful thought,James.I enjoyed it.
Mehta Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 2:33 PM
It is very moving and touchy emotional haiku full of feelings for Babe Ruth, Jimbo
Johnson Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Wow, tears came to my eyes... Beautiful. Thank you for sharing this lovely work!
Neels Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 9:37 AM
James this is an absolutely beautiful write ;) He is still watching over you even from heaven
Haick Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 9:23 AM
Aww Jimbo, Soooo sorry about your "Babe Ruth"..Retrievers are my favorites! They can be so gentle and loving!! This goes to my favs. list. Love, Audrey
La France Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 8:54 AM
Oh James, I just love this and it is so beautiful.. you made me cry~~
Crisci Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 8:46 AM
Hi, James. I have enjoyed reading your Haiku. Sorry for you loss...I can feel the love you still have for your dog...reminiscing the days in the glistening snow. I hope your are enjoying your Thanksgiving Holiday. Smile...God loves you! Peace and Love, Andrew.
Richards Avatar
November 27, 2010 at 8:15 AM
This one really touches my heart, James. We have always been a Golden Retriever family...have had several.......best dogs we ever had. We do have a Lab at the moment...but our fondest memories are of the retrievers......they are the best, and sweetest personalities ever. I want another someday. Sweet poem indeed!
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November 27, 2010 at 8:14 AM
Nice touching write my freind..all the best in contest...Michael
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