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Silently it falls throughout the night Nestling in the nooks of wishful mind Only option to a sense of sight Wond’ring how it looks were she not blind. ----------------------------------------------- 24th October, 2015 Contest: Wind, Snow or Rain Acrostrain Sponsor: Jan Allison Placed 2nd

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John Lawless

Date: 12/13/2015 5:00:00 PM

Ah, Paul, a poignant, thought provoking, visual and an equally eloquent poem. Thanks...

Paul Callus
Date: 12/14/2015 10:38:00 AM

Thank you, John. Your lovely feedback is truly appreciated. ~ Regards // paul

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/11/2015 9:27:00 AM

Congratulations Paul.

Paul Callus
Date: 12/11/2015 4:23:00 PM

Thank you Nayda. Have a nice weekend:) // paul

Skat A

Date: 12/10/2015 1:16:00 PM

Paul, Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Paul Callus
Date: 12/10/2015 4:39:00 PM

Glad that enjoyed, Skat! Thank you:) // paul

Lu Loo

Date: 12/10/2015 11:42:00 AM

Paul, congrats on your well deserved win in the Snow Contest!! :)-*smiles* -luloo

Paul Callus
Date: 12/10/2015 4:38:00 PM

Thank you, Laura. Your visitand *smiles* are most welcome:) Regards // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/9/2015 10:33:00 PM

Very wonderful write Paul.. congrats on great win!

Paul Callus
Date: 12/10/2015 4:28:00 PM

Thank you, Upma:) Glad that you enjoyed. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/9/2015 9:14:00 PM

Hey Paul, congrats to us!!! :D! hehehe! coffee toasts! hahaha! :P~Olive Eloisa =`)

Paul Callus
Date: 12/10/2015 4:02:00 PM

Thank you Olive_eloi:) Scones, marmalade, coffee or tea will be enough for me! Hugs // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/27/2015 9:12:00 AM

A deep thought to think about, Paul. Your imagery tugs at the heart as we ponder things we take for granted. All the best for the contest. Sandra

Paul Callus
Date: 10/27/2015 2:28:00 PM

You are right, Sandra; we take too many things for granted. We also often tend to forget how lucky we are to have certain things that others don't. ~ All the best. // paul

Kelly Deschler

Date: 10/26/2015 9:31:00 PM

I am mesmerized by her wonderings of what the snow must look like... I loved everything about this poem, Paul. The imagery, the form and my reaction when reading that final line... Making this a favorite! Good luck in Jan's contest!

Paul Callus
Date: 10/27/2015 12:53:00 PM

Your feedback is very uplifting, Kelly. You do 'read' a poem when you read it! Thank you for encouraging a humble poet:) .. and for the fav. ~ Warm regards // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/26/2015 9:07:00 PM

Paul such short lines but then again a wow esp in the last line.. I didn`t expect that maybe i must do some in my endings like thAT TOO for a change.. =`)~Olive Eloisa hugs!

Paul Callus
Date: 10/27/2015 12:49:00 PM

As you know, Olive_eloi, my preference is for short poems; a slight twist adds to the desired effect; very often it just pops up on impulse! Thank you for your unwavering support:) Hugs // paul

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/24/2015 7:05:00 PM

Wonderful poem on snow my friend. A7 Wrote mine on snow too. Good luck in the contest..

Paul Callus
Date: 10/24/2015 7:27:00 PM

Pleased that you like it, Robert...thank you for the comments and the high rating, my friend! Txs also for being the first to comment...so far a lone visitor! // paul