Paul Callus Poet Acrostic

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Snow Acrostrain

Silently it falls throughout the night
Nestling in the nooks of wishful mind
Only option to a sense of sight
Wond’ring how it looks were she not blind.


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24th October, 2015
Contest: Wind, Snow or Rain Acrostrain
Sponsor: Jan Allison
Placed 2nd

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John Lawless December 13, 2015 at 5:00 PM Ah, Paul, a poignant, thought provoking, visual and an equally eloquent poem. Thanks... Paul Callus December 14, 2015 at 10:38 AM Thank you, John. Your lovely feedback is truly appreciated. ~ Regards // paul

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 11, 2015 at 9:27 AM Congratulations Paul. Paul Callus December 11, 2015 at 4:23 PM Thank you Nayda. Have a nice weekend:) // paul

Skat A December 10, 2015 at 1:16 PM Paul, Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT* Paul Callus December 10, 2015 at 4:39 PM Glad that enjoyed, Skat! Thank you:) // paul

Beautiful Scars December 10, 2015 at 11:42 AM Paul, congrats on your well deserved win in the Snow Contest!! :)-*smiles* -luloo Paul Callus December 10, 2015 at 4:38 PM Thank you, Laura. Your visitand *smiles* are most welcome:) Regards // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 9, 2015 at 10:33 PM Very wonderful write Paul.. congrats on great win! Paul Callus December 10, 2015 at 4:28 PM Thank you, Upma:) Glad that you enjoyed. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 9, 2015 at 9:14 PM Hey Paul, congrats to us!!! :D! hehehe! coffee toasts! hahaha! :P~Olive Eloisa =`) Paul Callus December 10, 2015 at 4:02 PM Thank you Olive_eloi:) Scones, marmalade, coffee or tea will be enough for me! Hugs // paul

Sandra Haight October 27, 2015 at 9:12 AM A deep thought to think about, Paul. Your imagery tugs at the heart as we ponder things we take for granted. All the best for the contest. Sandra Paul Callus October 27, 2015 at 2:28 PM You are right, Sandra; we take too many things for granted. We also often tend to forget how lucky we are to have certain things that others don't. ~ All the best. // paul

Kelly Deschler October 26, 2015 at 9:31 PM I am mesmerized by her wonderings of what the snow must look like... I loved everything about this poem, Paul. The imagery, the form and my reaction when reading that final line... Making this a favorite! Good luck in Jan's contest! Paul Callus October 27, 2015 at 12:53 PM Your feedback is very uplifting, Kelly. You do 'read' a poem when you read it! Thank you for encouraging a humble poet:) .. and for the fav. ~ Warm regards // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 26, 2015 at 9:07 PM Paul such short lines but then again a wow esp in the last line.. I didn`t expect that maybe i must do some in my endings like thAT TOO for a change.. =`)~Olive Eloisa hugs! Paul Callus October 27, 2015 at 12:49 PM As you know, Olive_eloi, my preference is for short poems; a slight twist adds to the desired effect; very often it just pops up on impulse! Thank you for your unwavering support:) Hugs // paul

Robert Lindley October 24, 2015 at 7:05 PM Wonderful poem on snow my friend. A7 Wrote mine on snow too. Good luck in the contest.. Paul Callus October 24, 2015 at 7:27 PM Pleased that you like it, Robert...thank you for the comments and the high rating, my friend! Txs also for being the first to comment...so far a lone visitor! // paul