Snow

gentle comes the snow wafting cool kisses of white on my outstretched tongue

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Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 9:25:00 AM

Janet,:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. Hope you had a wonderful Valentines day. ~SKAT LOVE~

Ralph Sergi

Date: 2/12/2015 7:32:00 PM

Hi Janet I can taste the snow. Beautifully done.

Daver Austin

Date: 2/10/2015 10:32:00 AM

Very whimsical. Makes me feel old, old, old. Day was I would have done this with great pleasure. Congrats. daver

Viv Wigley

Date: 2/9/2015 12:22:00 PM

Only two weeks ago, on my way into town I stuck my tongue out and caught a snowflake. A split second of sensual joy- just as you captured it in only three lines. That's all it needed. Lovely Haiku. From Mister Viv x

Tonytocaa Camacho

Date: 2/9/2015 11:01:00 AM

Janet,love the gentleness and how you describe the imagery in these words of softness delight ahh thanks tonytocaa

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/1/2015 10:13:00 AM

Hi Janet, thank you so much for the nice reply...LINDA

Janet Boebert
Date: 2/3/2015 7:07:00 PM

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 1/31/2015 6:47:00 AM

Maybe our eyes meet in the same snowflakes,maybe we look the same star,or read the same haiku.Congrat

Janet Boebert
Date: 1/31/2015 2:11:00 PM

What a beautiful image - eyes meet in the same snowflake.... Thank you for this!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/31/2015 1:20:00 AM

Nice Icee Haiku, Janet, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Janet Boebert
Date: 1/31/2015 2:16:00 PM

Thank you, Linda. This is a friendly community, isn't it? Thank you for your welcome and invite. I'm not sure I'm ready for any contest yet; I am grateful for the encouragement and any help or advice.

Skat A

Date: 1/31/2015 12:58:00 AM

Janet, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Janet Boebert
Date: 1/31/2015 2:19:00 PM

Thank you for the welcome note! I am kind of amazed and overwhelmed at the friendly and encouraging comments I've received already!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/30/2015 2:07:00 PM

- Every snowflake unique - Lovely haiku, Janet - Welcome to P-Soup - hug // Anne-Lise :)

Janet Boebert
Date: 1/31/2015 2:20:00 PM

Thank you for the welcome and support. I really appreciate it!

Jan Allison

Date: 1/30/2015 2:02:00 PM

such delightful imagery - reminded me of when I was a small child. I really enjoyed your haiku a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan

Janet Boebert
Date: 1/31/2015 2:20:00 PM

I'm pretty far from being a child - but I still like to catch snowflakes on my tongue. I'm glad you enjoyed!

Jean Omalley Polatnick

Date: 1/30/2015 1:59:00 PM

Thanks for the smile. Well done!

Janet Boebert
Date: 1/31/2015 2:21:00 PM

Thank you! Your comment made me smile, too!