Snow

gentle comes the snow
wafting cool kisses of white
on my outstretched tongue

kisssnowweatherwinterhaiku

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Skat A

February 15, 2015 at 9:25 AM

Janet,:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. Hope you had a wonderful Valentines day. ~SKAT LOVE~

Ralph Sergi

February 12, 2015 at 7:32 PM

Hi Janet I can taste the snow. Beautifully done.

Daver Austin

February 10, 2015 at 10:32 AM

Very whimsical. Makes me feel old, old, old. Day was I would have done this with great pleasure. Congrats. daver

Viv Wigley

February 9, 2015 at 12:22 PM

Only two weeks ago, on my way into town I stuck my tongue out and caught a snowflake. A split second of sensual joy- just as you captured it in only three lines. That's all it needed. Lovely Haiku. From Mister Viv x

Tonytocaa Camacho

February 9, 2015 at 11:01 AM

Janet,love the gentleness and how you describe the imagery in these words of softness delight ahh thanks tonytocaa

Poet Destroyer A

February 1, 2015 at 10:13 AM

Hi Janet, thank you so much for the nice reply...LINDA

Janet Boebert

February 3, 2015 at 7:07 PM

Ovidiu Bocsa

January 31, 2015 at 6:47 AM

Maybe our eyes meet in the same snowflakes,maybe we look the same star,or read the same haiku.Congrat

Janet Boebert

January 31, 2015 at 2:11 PM

What a beautiful image - eyes meet in the same snowflake.... Thank you for this!

Poet Destroyer A

January 31, 2015 at 1:20 AM

Nice Icee Haiku, Janet, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Janet Boebert

January 31, 2015 at 2:16 PM

Thank you, Linda. This is a friendly community, isn't it? Thank you for your welcome and invite. I'm not sure I'm ready for any contest yet; I am grateful for the encouragement and any help or advice.

Skat A

January 31, 2015 at 12:58 AM

Janet, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Janet Boebert

January 31, 2015 at 2:19 PM

Thank you for the welcome note! I am kind of amazed and overwhelmed at the friendly and encouraging comments I've received already!