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cold crystalline clouds sparkling snowflakes slowly swirl winter wonderland 29th January 2015

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Date: 2/1/2015 1:13:00 PM
When it first was shown in the US (in 1913 at the NY Armory Show) one critic described it as an explosion in a shingles factory. / M
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2015 1:16:00 PM
I can only imagine the reactions Maurice it is such a unique stunning work of art:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/1/2015 12:56:00 PM
Snow easily turns itself into a monster, Jan. We had 2 feet dumped on us a few days ago and tomorrow we expect another foot! However, I do understand the beauty of your description. Marcel Duchamp's most famous painting can be called up on the Internet or Google. It's one of my very favorite iconic images of the 20th century. Thanks for the stop. / M
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Date: 2/1/2015 1:00:00 PM
Oh Maurice i love snow ... but only on Christmas cards! I googled the image Maurice - wow it is stunning not at all what i expected! Hugs jan xxx
Date: 1/30/2015 9:02:00 AM
You are on a roll Jan, three in one day. Well done!
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Date: 1/30/2015 9:49:00 AM
I had a 4 day break Richard as I hit a crisis point in my life but I am back on track now:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/30/2015 7:16:00 AM
What a marvel of a Haiku! A seven from me dear, Jan!
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Date: 1/30/2015 9:48:00 AM
Thanks so much Demetrios:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/29/2015 4:36:00 PM
Nice alliteration here! Makes me feel like singing! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/29/2015 4:39:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Matthew:-) We have had a few flurries of snow today on our little Island:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 1/29/2015 4:09:00 PM
Great imagery Jan....glad you're back....hugs Tim xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/29/2015 4:30:00 PM
Thanks Tim - life issues got a little complex - I just needed some time out:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/29/2015 4:09:00 PM
i want to be there! beautiful haiku, Jan, and love the pic too
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/29/2015 4:29:00 PM
Thanks Jack:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/29/2015 2:28:00 PM
Hi, Jan, good to see a new post from you. The snow is swirling ever so beautifully around that deer!! I hope you are enjoying a great day. I need to be back in class RIGHT NOW and you were my last comment to reply to. YIPEEEEEE
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/29/2015 2:32:00 PM
Thanks so much - I needed a bit of time out Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 1/29/2015 2:15:00 PM
glad you're back and on the roll with this charming 'ku, jan... congrats on your recent wins; will send personal notes soon.. had a busy birth-month... stay well.. huggs
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Date: 1/29/2015 2:18:00 PM
I hit a crisis point in my life Nette and had to take a break:-( Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/29/2015 1:28:00 PM
Hi my dear friend, It is so good to see you able to write again. And to start with a Haiku that is also an alliteration. Not to mention very beautiful. Into my fav's and of course a seven. Have missed you very much. take care of yourself please.
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Shane Cooper
Date: 1/29/2015 2:19:00 PM
So am I
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/29/2015 2:17:00 PM
Not at the moment sorry:-( hugs Jan x
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Shane Cooper
Date: 1/29/2015 1:41:00 PM
may I mail?
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/29/2015 1:37:00 PM
Thanks Shane I am taking care of myself big style need to get my batteries recharged but I am back to commenting and writing just this simple poem:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 1/29/2015 1:15:00 PM
I have missed you and so I am glad you are back . . . with a haiku to boot!! May the wonder in winter fill your heart with joy and love. 7
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Date: 1/29/2015 1:23:00 PM
Thanks so much David that is such a lovely comment to come back to:-) I hit a bit of a crisis and so I took a few days away from soup and life in general! :-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/29/2015 11:38:00 AM
- A Beautiful winter wonderland picture, Jan - We are expecting snow to the weekend - // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 1/29/2015 11:57:00 AM
It has snowed here but has not yet reached all the Island so thankfully we are snow free for now:-) Hugs Jan xx
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