Snow

Divinity’s breath,  

           Purity's incarnation, 

                          Innocence's gala:

                                                  Snow!    




© Demetrios Trifiatis
 17 NOVEMBER 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 2:56 AM
Splendid tribute to snow, Demi! Drew me in straight away with the opening line. (usually good wine is left till the end!) #7 // paul
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November 20, 2014 at 2:21 AM
outstanding pen demetrios love how this melted in my mind pal
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November 20, 2014 at 4:44 AM
Happy that my poem found such a wonderful place to melt dear Liam!
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November 19, 2014 at 4:52 AM
- Beautiful poem about snow my friend Demetrios - (but must admit that I do not like snow, cold on my feet :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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November 19, 2014 at 4:57 AM
Having being in Canada for close to twenty years I understand you but being in Greece where snow is rare then it becomes romantic. However its natural purity is the one that inspired me. Thank you so much dear friend, Anne-Lise!
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November 17, 2014 at 11:32 PM
Very beautifully written my dear friend Demetrios. I really enjoyed it. Have a great week! A 7 from me! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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November 18, 2014 at 4:05 AM
It is so sweet of you to visit and grade me in such a superlative way, dear Dorian, thank you! Hugs!
Anish Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 4:09 PM
Snow is so beautiful - though shoveling and driving in it are no fun. You hit the mark with this brief ode to Nature's beautiful creation. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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November 17, 2014 at 5:45 PM
My friend Matthew, shoveling and driving in the snow, I agree, is not fun at all! I know it first hand as I have spent almost twenty years in Canada and some of them in Port Cartier and Seven Islands, Quebec! In Greece is much easier for seldom we see snow! Thank you for your visit and kind comment!
Gifford Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 9:48 AM
When I see your name as the author of a poem, I know it will be a good one. And I wasn't disappointed in reading this one either. Keep them coming!
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November 17, 2014 at 5:55 PM
Thank you, Darlene, for your gracious words and visit! Greatly appreciated!
Ellison Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 8:00 AM
So well described, my friend! Woke up to a "dusting", enough to cover the ground! A winter wonderland but as an ex-Montrealer, you know snow!!! Have a great day!
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November 19, 2014 at 4:45 AM
I am sorry my dear friend, Jack, for not replying to your comment. You see, I was left with the impression I had. Now, from what I hear, I think you have got more than "dusting". Thank you for visiting!
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November 17, 2014 at 4:21 AM
My dear poet, this is simply stupendous. :) Beautiful...
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November 17, 2014 at 4:31 AM
How wonderful to see your smile shining again dear, Eileen! Thank you for visiting and commenting so beautifully!
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November 17, 2014 at 1:27 AM
Innocence gala ,pure as an infant's first dream...Beautiful Epigram,Demi! Charma
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November 17, 2014 at 2:10 AM
Dearest Charma, Your comment, my dawn! Thank you so much! !
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