Snow

whimsical winter white crystal flakes of wonder fluffy snow, bright white, leaves the world a blunder. a blanket coats the world, unmarred, pure, sugary flakes, in a whirl assure that winter is here
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Johnson Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 7:20 PM
Great win Audrey. Congratulations. Joyce
Decker Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 12:44 PM
Thank You so much Joyce!
Freeman Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 12:15 PM
Yes beautiful Audrey a gem of a picture of the freshness of a new snow brings even to the senses as the beauty reveals the purness of a bright white blanket covering the brown. Well worthy of it honor, my dear. Thanks for sharing, Agape, Moses
Decker Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 12:45 PM
Thank you, it is nice to hear!
Quigley Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 10:12 AM
A beautiful flow to this poem Audrey. Congratulations on your win
Decker Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 12:46 PM
thanks so much Bob!
Brown Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 7:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Pictures of winter" contest Audrey. Love, Carol
Decker Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 12:46 PM
Thank you Carol! :)
Song Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 4:39 AM
Unique description of a winter scene...sugary flakes in a whirl...unmarred and pure...swell lines! Congrats Audrey--Gwendolen
Decker Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Thank you!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 1:12 AM
Cpngratilations this is comjurs a great picture xx
Decker Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Thanks Mandy!
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December 5, 2011 at 8:28 PM
My congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Audrey. Your poem brings back the winter's magic that we all love. I wish you more wins in the near future. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs, Andrew.
Decker Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 12:48 PM
Thank You Andrew!
Brown Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 5:25 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "Any 2011 Poem" contest Audrey. Love, Carol
Decker Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 5:35 AM
Thank you Carol!
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November 16, 2011 at 3:23 AM
love the flow of your poem,..p.d.
Decker Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 5:30 AM
thank you
Quigley Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 10:10 PM
Congratulations on your HM in Brian's contest Audrey
Decker Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 5:31 AM
Thank you bob :)
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