Snow

There has been a dark shadow
In my world of light
It has engulfed and consumed all of me
In my time it has left me cold and bitter
And blinded my sight from the light
 
Now that I look back on the path that I made
And the all consuming shadow that I made
I notice it has faded into the past
This path I had made
 
In my shadow I was alone
Not understanding I was the foe
Until you started to walk in the snow
I felt every flake flow with a glow
 
Now I look back on my world
All I see are flakes of snow
Flowing from the heavens with love
Showing me things from above
 
Thank you for being my snow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Butt Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 6:43 AM
Thanks for your comment :) Your poems are really good, I very much like the way you write.
Deane Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 4:18 AM
Thanks for your comments, only right that I return the favor. I like the flow of your poem very well written, keep writing.... shannon
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace