Snow

Earth her cotton bra Slip on, soft white, fallen clouds Fresh milk of heaven This is the undress Of trees, rivers, homes and things Time's skin, milky white White as bones in light The feathers of angels wings Fruits upon the sight Now the heavens flake Petals cuddled on the ground Crystal dust of winds

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C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 12/1/2010 1:37:00 AM

beautiful descriptions,tmfvs.

Skat A

Date: 11/25/2010 9:05:00 PM

David, enjoyed all the snow Haiku~best holiday wishes*Luv~Skat

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/24/2010 9:28:00 PM

excellent David, i love the snow, having spent the first 23 years of my life, in England and a promise of snow every year. enjoyed reading these Haiku. Harry

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/23/2010 10:33:00 PM

You sure depicted snow so uniquely here, David-- and that last line was just amazing I think! Loved that--"crystal dust"-- nikko :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/23/2010 9:45:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your Haiku's David. We are up to our knees in the winter dust. I have to go out and shovel today again. Have a great day. God Bless Phyl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/22/2010 9:22:00 AM

David, this one uses such wonderful metaphoric expressions that I wanted to read it again and again..It is one for my favs..I appreciate you stopping by and commenting on my work about commerilzation of Christmas..Sara

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 11/22/2010 5:09:00 AM

a BEAUTY.........BRAVO

Joshua Lacey

Date: 11/20/2010 2:08:00 PM

peculiar way of looking at winter, good descritptions though

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/19/2010 1:43:00 PM

Oi,! i LOVE THE WAY YOU GAVE EARHT CLOTHE OF WHITE,, LOVE IT! DAVID. time WILL CHANGE ALL LOOKS ENJOYED YOUR HAIKUS,..P.D.