Snow!!!

>*+*<


Sleep eludes me, my thoughts control me
  
       Need to know, what will it be

             Oh, no end to this, I see

                   What will it be

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Poet Destroyer A

November 23, 2010 at 1:19 PM

Hello, Joy hum! wondering what thoughts would it be,, enjoyed your pem,..p.d.

Joy Wellington

November 19, 2010 at 6:10 AM

And the world keeps guessing!! Well this is one of the things that the answer will manifest itself someday soon. You all just have to wait.

L'Nass Shango

November 19, 2010 at 6:04 AM

I shall wait and you will tell us all ... peace!

Audrey Haick

October 6, 2010 at 9:15 PM

I can so relate, my dear friend...Hope you're doing well, Joy...Soup Mail Love, Audrey

Doris Culverhouse

October 6, 2010 at 7:18 AM

sometimes I write a poem and then go back 2 months later and read it and think...what was I thinking? this makes no sense!!

Doris Culverhouse

October 6, 2010 at 7:17 AM

I see the snow of thoughts now!! enjoyed and well written!

Constance La France

October 6, 2010 at 6:58 AM

I love the snow falling which is odd, my mother told me I was born in a major snow storm... sometimes my thoughts are like that also...

Joy Wellington

October 5, 2010 at 9:33 PM

This is about some thoughts that was cascading down on me in swift succession, sending me into a turmoil of mental anguish. I got up and wrote this poem and the topic snow came to mind as I relate the fall of snow to my swirling thoughts.