Snow!!!

>*+*<


Sleep eludes me, my thoughts control me
  
       Need to know, what will it be

             Oh, no end to this, I see

                   What will it be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/23/2010 1:19:00 PM
Hello, Joy hum! wondering what thoughts would it be,, enjoyed your pem,..p.d.
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Date: 11/19/2010 6:10:00 AM
And the world keeps guessing!! Well this is one of the things that the answer will manifest itself someday soon. You all just have to wait.
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Date: 11/19/2010 6:04:00 AM
I shall wait and you will tell us all ... peace!
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Date: 10/6/2010 9:15:00 PM
I can so relate, my dear friend...Hope you're doing well, Joy...Soup Mail Love, Audrey
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Date: 10/6/2010 7:18:00 AM
sometimes I write a poem and then go back 2 months later and read it and think...what was I thinking? this makes no sense!!
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Date: 10/6/2010 7:17:00 AM
I see the snow of thoughts now!! enjoyed and well written!
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Date: 10/6/2010 6:58:00 AM
I love the snow falling which is odd, my mother told me I was born in a major snow storm... sometimes my thoughts are like that also...
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Date: 10/5/2010 9:33:00 PM
This is about some thoughts that was cascading down on me in swift succession, sending me into a turmoil of mental anguish. I got up and wrote this poem and the topic snow came to mind as I relate the fall of snow to my swirling thoughts.
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:45:00 PM
Enjoyed your work today..I am glad that I chose this one to read..Sara
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Date: 10/5/2010 4:10:00 AM
snow?? what was it?? I have to know!!
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