Snow

They say she's just like snow
     Beautiful but cold 
     But once she cared to much
     For someone who never cared 
     bout her at all.
     The cold is just like a shield
     To take care of her soul.
     Cause all those that come in 
     Take a piece from her and go.
     All she was before was Beautiful 
     Not cold.
     But someone broke her soul 
      A couple years ago. 
      As cold as she might seem 
      She cares more than you know 
      But hides within her shield
      And let's her feelings go...
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Agustin Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 10:23 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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