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New Chance with Pleiades for the New Year - Revised Description Poetry Contest
Andrea Dietrich


Six inches fell that night
Snow-cover made for skiers 
Silvery white snowflakes
Swirling in slow cadence
Several kids woke up
Saw the glistening hills
Snow chasers left the house

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/2/2025 6:19:00 AM

Congrats, Connie! I can feel the snow chasers excitement.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 1/1/2025 11:46:00 PM

'glistening hills' - beautiful imagery dear poet. Congratulations on your win. Cheers!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2025 8:48:00 PM

You made it into a cute story. Snow chasers I liked even though you used the word snow. It was used in a unique way. Congrats on your win