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An Andrea Dietrich Contest: New Chance with Pleiades for the New Year - Revised Description'...Submitted 28 Dec 24
Slip sliding from chilled breeze Slivers of flurries waltz Softly mantling old trees Silver-coated by rain: Snaking down down glossed yard Soon...frost will enchant you Smile! Crystals peck your cheeks.

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Date: 1/6/2025 4:20:00 PM
Nette, A wonderful description of snow. I just smile reading it...and smiling is something I do enjoy....especially the internal kind. All fun when there is something like this to read! Thanks!!
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Date: 1/2/2025 11:34:00 AM
Nice imagery, Nette! Congrats!
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Date: 1/2/2025 7:41:00 AM
Lovely choice of S words seamlessly integrated into a great poem, congratulations
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Date: 1/2/2025 12:20:00 AM
waltz.. beautiful. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers.
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Date: 1/1/2025 9:10:00 PM
Love this, Better, and the last line is adorable. Congrats
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Date: 12/28/2024 4:41:00 PM
Lovely writing, Nette- the end made it magic.
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Date: 12/28/2024 6:40:00 AM
Nice use of the letter S, dear Nette.... nice selection of words and you have arranged it so well..
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Date: 12/27/2024 10:21:00 PM
I love to see it Nette, it certainly brings out the child in us. Its even better now I'm retired, I can watch it from inside. Happy New year to you and your family. Tom
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Date: 12/27/2024 3:24:00 PM
Let it snow! Cute!
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