Snow

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An Andrea Dietrich Contest: New Chance with Pleiades for the New Year - Revised Description'...Submitted 28 Dec 24

Slip sliding from chilled breeze
Slivers of flurries waltz
Softly mantling old trees
Silver-coated by rain:
Snaking down down glossed yard
Soon...frost will enchant you
Smile! Crystals peck your cheeks.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/6/2025 4:20:00 PM

Nette, A wonderful description of snow. I just smile reading it...and smiling is something I do enjoy....especially the internal kind. All fun when there is something like this to read! Thanks!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/2/2025 11:34:00 AM

Nice imagery, Nette! Congrats!

Terry Miller

Date: 1/2/2025 7:41:00 AM

Lovely choice of S words seamlessly integrated into a great poem, congratulations

thriveni c mysore

Date: 1/2/2025 12:20:00 AM

waltz.. beautiful. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2025 9:10:00 PM

Love this, Better, and the last line is adorable. Congrats

Paige Hind

Date: 12/28/2024 4:41:00 PM

Lovely writing, Nette- the end made it magic.

Silent One

Date: 12/28/2024 6:40:00 AM

Nice use of the letter S, dear Nette.... nice selection of words and you have arranged it so well..

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/27/2024 10:21:00 PM

I love to see it Nette, it certainly brings out the child in us. Its even better now I'm retired, I can watch it from inside. Happy New year to you and your family. Tom

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/27/2024 3:24:00 PM

Let it snow! Cute!