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Entry for New Chance with Pleiades for the New Year Poetry Contest: Sponsored by:Andrea Dietrich 

 

Soft fell upon your shrine Settling, covering words So lately graved, did those Snowflakes; winters first fall Since sorrows darkness smite; Summer’s tokens fading, Shrouded, by snow, on stone.

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Date: 1/3/2025 8:19:00 AM
i really like this one cos it reads like a proper rounded poem and not just a descriptive list as many pleiades do..congrats on contest placement :)
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Terry Miller
Date: 2/16/2025 1:27:00 AM
Thank you Charlotte it is a difficult form to create flow
Date: 1/2/2025 1:54:00 PM
A sad and lovely poem, Terry. Congratulations on your win. :)
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/3/2025 12:58:00 AM
Thank you so much and Happy New Year!
Date: 1/2/2025 10:49:00 AM
You did well with your Pleiades. Congrats.
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/3/2025 12:58:00 AM
Thank you so much and Happy New Year!
Date: 1/2/2025 7:57:00 AM
Well done, Terry. So articulate. Cheers from Canada.
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/3/2025 12:59:00 AM
Thank you Jim and Happy New Year!
Date: 1/2/2025 12:34:00 AM
+fav, I read it many times over. your words choked me dear poet. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/2/2025 7:49:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 1/1/2025 9:19:00 PM
Love the melancholy tone. Congrats in my contest.
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/2/2025 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Andrea and for hosting this contest, it was a tough form, but fun to try, you had so many wonderful entries
Date: 12/31/2024 7:11:00 AM
Terry, your poem has touched me deeply this morning. You have vividly described this scene and the somber mood that accompanies it! Janice
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Terry Miller
Date: 1/2/2025 7:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Janice

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