Terry Miller Poet Pleiades

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Entry for New Chance with Pleiades for the New Year Poetry Contest: Sponsored by:Andrea Dietrich 

 

Snow

Soft fell upon your shrine
Settling, covering words
So lately graved, did those
Snowflakes; winters first fall
Since sorrows darkness smite;
Summer’s tokens fading,
Shrouded, by snow, on stone.

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Charlotte Puddifoot January 3, 2025 at 8:19 AM i really like this one cos it reads like a proper rounded poem and not just a descriptive list as many pleiades do..congrats on contest placement :) Terry Miller February 16, 2025 at 1:27 AM Thank you Charlotte it is a difficult form to create flow

Evelyn Judy Buehler January 2, 2025 at 1:54 PM A sad and lovely poem, Terry. Congratulations on your win. :) Terry Miller January 3, 2025 at 12:58 AM Thank you so much and Happy New Year!

Victor Buhagiar January 2, 2025 at 10:49 AM You did well with your Pleiades. Congrats. Terry Miller January 3, 2025 at 12:58 AM Thank you so much and Happy New Year!

Jim Healey January 2, 2025 at 7:57 AM Well done, Terry. So articulate. Cheers from Canada. Terry Miller January 3, 2025 at 12:59 AM Thank you Jim and Happy New Year!

thriveni c mysore January 2, 2025 at 12:34 AM +fav, I read it many times over. your words choked me dear poet. Congratulations on your win. Terry Miller January 2, 2025 at 7:49 AM Thank you so much

Andrea Dietrich January 1, 2025 at 9:19 PM Love the melancholy tone. Congrats in my contest. Terry Miller January 2, 2025 at 7:50 AM Thank you Andrea and for hosting this contest, it was a tough form, but fun to try, you had so many wonderful entries

Janice Canerdy December 31, 2024 at 7:11 AM Terry, your poem has touched me deeply this morning. You have vividly described this scene and the somber mood that accompanies it! Janice Terry Miller January 2, 2025 at 7:50 AM Thank you so much Janice