Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Personification

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March 22, 2024

"personification poem about the wind, rain, Snow, thunder or Sun" Poetry Contest (8 - 12 lines)

Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

FIRST  PLACE

Snow

                             An ethereal lady visiting us!
                         She arrives magnificently dressed
                 In white silky laces, and exquisite silver jewellery,
                     Glistening and glittering, in a light feathery gown.

                She breezes in dancing and prancing around the trees,
                  But gradually her angelic silhouette gets blurred
                    By a luminous veil - her dainty slender figure
                                Becoming translucent to our eyes...

                  With her celestial magic wand, she turns the tall 
                          Evergreens gorgeously adorned with
                Shimmering snow-pellets, each snowflake reflecting 
                 Elation and ecstasy concealed and crystallized!

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Sam Kauffman April 8, 2024 at 4:48 PM Mala, dear friend, your lines are draped in in beautiful images born out of fairytales and purest fantasy spreading the magic of snow from a "celestial wand." I am totally enchanted by your poem. Congratulations on your win. Easter blessings and hugs to you! Malabika Ray Choudhury April 9, 2024 at 2:19 PM Dear Sam, Thank you so much for your inspiring and kindest words! Living in Canada for many years, I got used to snow, and enjoy snowy days. Some days, when I don’t have to go to work, and get the opportunity to watch the falling snow - the silvery snowflakes, the evergreens draped with snow-pellets, I feel captivated by the magical beauty! Love and many Hugs to you, My Gifted Friend!

Paula Goldsmith April 7, 2024 at 8:27 AM Congratulations on your win. A beautiful "Snow" write. I love watching her dance around the yard. Now sleep until next year.... Have a blessed day writing away........... Malabika Ray Choudhury April 7, 2024 at 8:46 AM Thank you, Dear Paula. This year I was in India most of the winter, so didn’t have much chance to enjoy our Snow-lady dancing around! Delighted to hear from you - looking forward to reading your lovely poems! Love and Blessings, Sweetest Friend!

Tania Kitchin April 5, 2024 at 4:22 PM Mala, wonderfully enchanting, congratulations on your first place win. Malabika Ray Choudhury April 5, 2024 at 4:27 PM Dear Tania, Thank you so much for the placement. I am equally humbled and honoured!

Kim Rodrigues March 31, 2024 at 2:40 PM I love this ethereal lady :) Malabika Ray Choudhury March 31, 2024 at 3:57 PM Me too! She is so beautiful - in her white lacy gown! Thank you, Kim.

Regina Mcintosh March 31, 2024 at 1:29 PM Like a song, gracefully done, composed of notes both gentle and soft. Love this and you, God bless you Malabika Ray Choudhury March 31, 2024 at 3:55 PM Thanks, Gina. Appreciate your comment.

Silent One March 23, 2024 at 8:44 AM Your poem is a testament to the transformative power of winter and the captivating beauty found in nature's ephemeral moments. Through its rich imagery and lyrical language, it invites readers to marvel at the splendor of the season and appreciate the magical moments that unfold before our eyes. Malabika Ray Choudhury March 24, 2024 at 2:36 PM Dear SO, how do I thank you enough for your inspiring and positive comments! I was a brand new writer when I joined this site...from then your encouraging comments and placements in your contests have helped me to grow as a poet. Still learning...I am truly thankful and grateful to you for your feedback; also your exquisite poems have served as my models for excellence. Keep showing us the direction..Warm wishes~