Snow

give me a small word, inside which is a wonder's white touch and sudden loss of time childish happiness enthusiastic, innocent a small word not love but snow!

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James Peranteau

Date: 6/6/2009 1:17:00 PM

Fide,..well writen,...one of my favorite past times,.."Igloos" ! Congratulations on an excelent poem ! And win !!! james

Diane Christian

Date: 6/5/2009 6:59:00 AM

wow, a great poem congrats on your win, God bless you from diane

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/2/2009 4:27:00 PM

Congrats Fide on "Snow" making it. God Bless. Vince

Fide Erken

Date: 6/2/2009 6:47:00 AM

Thanks dear friends for your kind comments.I'm so happy and honoured to be chosen in this poetry contest.This is because of your sensitive souls sharing my poem with me.Love, Fide

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/1/2009 7:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Fide. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/1/2009 4:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your awesome and well deserved win! Love, Shar

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 6/1/2009 12:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win and being featured. Ernilando

Date: 5/31/2009 3:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your honorable mention in the contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Adeleke Adeite

Date: 5/31/2009 9:37:00 AM

My warmest congratulations to you dear on your awesome placement… you are such a wonderful writer… please let your poetry pen keep dancing to the drum beat of your passions and poetrysoup-land. You are great. leke

James Fraser

Date: 5/31/2009 7:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being placed > James

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/31/2009 6:46:00 AM

Congratulations on this fine poem!!! Hooray for you!

Janice Scott

Date: 5/31/2009 5:44:00 AM

Congrats on your win Fide!

Ernesto P. Santiago

Date: 5/31/2009 12:44:00 AM

My dear friend Fide, congratulations to you on placing in the soup's contest, well done! Am really happy for you. Best rgds, Ernesto

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/30/2009 11:33:00 PM

Fide congratulations on placing in the soup's contest, God Bless, MJ

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/3/2009 1:48:00 PM

Fide, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Sue Mason

Date: 4/27/2009 3:29:00 PM

Great description and beautiful write here that is now a "first round survivor" ... smile ... congratulations to you Fide and good luck in the contest!!

Fide Erken

Date: 4/14/2009 7:52:00 AM

Your comments make me very happy.Thank you very much. love, Fide

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/13/2009 4:21:00 PM

Beautiful.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/10/2009 5:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals Fide. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Ernesto P. Santiago

Date: 4/4/2009 1:02:00 PM

Hello Fide, my congratulations to you on your Snow making it to the finals, good luck! Cheers, Ernesto