Snow

give me a small word,
inside which is a wonder's white touch
and sudden loss of time
childish happiness
enthusiastic, innocent
a small word
not love but snow!

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James Peranteau

June 6, 2009 at 1:17 PM

Fide,..well writen,...one of my favorite past times,.."Igloos" ! Congratulations on an excelent poem ! And win !!! james

Diane Christian

June 5, 2009 at 6:59 AM

wow, a great poem congrats on your win, God bless you from diane

Vince Suzadail Jr.

June 2, 2009 at 4:27 PM

Congrats Fide on "Snow" making it. God Bless. Vince

Fide Erken

June 2, 2009 at 6:47 AM

Thanks dear friends for your kind comments.I'm so happy and honoured to be chosen in this poetry contest.This is because of your sensitive souls sharing my poem with me.Love, Fide

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 1, 2009 at 7:44 AM

Congratulations on your win Fide. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter

June 1, 2009 at 4:08 AM

Congratulations on your awesome and well deserved win! Love, Shar

Ernilando Tugaff

June 1, 2009 at 12:38 AM

Congratulations on your win and being featured. Ernilando

May 31, 2009 at 3:24 PM

Congratulations on your honorable mention in the contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Adeleke Adeite

May 31, 2009 at 9:37 AM

My warmest congratulations to you dear on your awesome placement… you are such a wonderful writer… please let your poetry pen keep dancing to the drum beat of your passions and poetrysoup-land. You are great. leke

James Fraser

May 31, 2009 at 7:14 AM

Congratulations on your poem being placed > James

Carrie Richards

May 31, 2009 at 6:46 AM

Congratulations on this fine poem!!! Hooray for you!

Janice Scott

May 31, 2009 at 5:44 AM

Congrats on your win Fide!

Ernesto P. Santiago

May 31, 2009 at 12:44 AM

My dear friend Fide, congratulations to you on placing in the soup's contest, well done! Am really happy for you. Best rgds, Ernesto

Michael Jordan

May 30, 2009 at 11:33 PM

Fide congratulations on placing in the soup's contest, God Bless, MJ

Raul Moreno

May 3, 2009 at 1:48 PM

Fide, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Sue Mason

April 27, 2009 at 3:29 PM

Great description and beautiful write here that is now a "first round survivor" ... smile ... congratulations to you Fide and good luck in the contest!!