Snow

Wet Snow Falling like tears Melting on my cheeks I look up at dark skies Remember forgotten fears Promised loves misguided lies Cleansed now by White Ever so clean Where once so dark A sparkling sheen.

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/20/2021 3:20:00 PM

Dear Kelli, its so nice to get lost in the beauty of the snow, It reminds us of our innocent days, making snow angels, and catching snowflakes with our tongues, Thank you for sharing the beauty,

Kelli White
Date: 8/11/2021 6:25:00 AM

Thank you very much mystic rose. ;0 KELLI

Dyezan Mencer

Date: 2/7/2021 1:39:00 PM

This is a beautifull poem. It brought tears to my eyes.

Kelli White
Date: 2/7/2021 1:43:00 PM

Thank you very much. We are getting a heavy snowstorm and it just made me think of this I wrote it down. I was shoveling snow.