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snow

Rain storms, ice crystals and freezing snow Thick breath vapor as they say hello Wool sweaters, furry coats and there they go Footprints melting in the pillowy snow Cigar's smoke stuck on chilled windowpanes Grey, white and all shades of frames Cherry-red cheecks and warm palms Blankets, wood stove and sweet psalms

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Date: 12/11/2019 12:15:00 PM
Hello Dido Ch, all that you described is winter with the freezing rain.Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 12/18/2019 4:17:00 PM
Thank you, it's winter really, have a nice day.
Date: 2/8/2019 9:50:00 AM
Right now, it's cold, a fire would do me good. A great rhyme, LW, Welcome to Soup and thank you for reading my work. May you have a great Valentine’s Day. hugs Eve
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Date: 2/8/2019 4:42:00 PM
Thank you Eve, may this Valentine warm our hearts.
Date: 1/30/2019 9:30:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Literary Waves. Love your avatar name. I would call this type of poem a RHYME poem because all of the end rhymes. It is lovely. Nice imagery, a word picture for us. Thank you for sharing! Hope to see more. Stay warm!
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Date: 1/31/2019 1:54:00 PM
that warms my heart. I made some re-editing. Best
Date: 1/30/2019 6:11:00 PM
Hello Literary Waves, so nice to meet you. Yes we must dress warm when going into the snow, when the wind blows it is cold. have a nice evening my friend.YP
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Date: 1/30/2019 7:08:00 PM
thanks, that makes my day. winter is really freezing.