Snow

Rain storms, ice crystals and freezing snow Thick breath vapor as they say hello Wool sweaters, furry coats and there they go Footprints melting in the pillowy snow Cigar's smoke stuck on chilled windowpanes Grey, white and all shades of frames Cherry-red cheecks and warm palms Blankets, wood stove and sweet psalms

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/11/2019 12:15:00 PM

Hello Dido Ch, all that you described is winter with the freezing rain.Have a nice day my friend.

Literary Waves
Date: 12/18/2019 4:17:00 PM

Thank you, it's winter really, have a nice day.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/8/2019 9:50:00 AM

Right now, it's cold, a fire would do me good. A great rhyme, LW, Welcome to Soup and thank you for reading my work. May you have a great Valentine’s Day. hugs Eve

Literary Waves
Date: 2/8/2019 4:42:00 PM

Thank you Eve, may this Valentine warm our hearts.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/30/2019 9:30:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup Literary Waves. Love your avatar name. I would call this type of poem a RHYME poem because all of the end rhymes. It is lovely. Nice imagery, a word picture for us. Thank you for sharing! Hope to see more. Stay warm!

Literary Waves
Date: 1/31/2019 1:54:00 PM

that warms my heart. I made some re-editing. Best

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/30/2019 6:11:00 PM

Hello Literary Waves, so nice to meet you. Yes we must dress warm when going into the snow, when the wind blows it is cold. have a nice evening my friend.YP

Literary Waves
Date: 1/30/2019 7:08:00 PM

thanks, that makes my day. winter is really freezing.