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Natalyn Hobbs (some of you know her here, on left). Her sister Lydia on right. My daughter, Angela, of course, in the middle.

 

Image may contain: 3 people, including Angela Maria Hobbs, people smiling, people standing and outdoor

Snippets of Lydia

She is very slender and her eyes are brown.
Her hair is lovely, long and dark.
Sometimes she wears colors in her hair or paints her nails.
When I visit at her house, she often scurries away
to be with her own little visiting girlfriends.
Not too interested in Grandma any more,
she is eleven going on twelve.

Sometimes she comes with her sister to stay over.
She cannot scurry off; I have her full attention!
I enjoy giving her and her sister treats like candy and ice cream.
She especially likes great-grandpa’s Klondike bars!
She is growing so fast and even babysitting a lot now.
She will probably grow taller than even me or her older sister.
She is eleven going on twelve.

I was there for her birth three days after one Christmas.
I floated her around in a pool that following summer,
watching her large wonderful eyes, just staring straight ahead.
She was so calm; she is quieter than her sister
(but maybe not when she is with her girlfriends).
I’ve watched her dance in recitals where she sparkled 
with more radiance than any other girl in her dance group.
Sweet notes she gave me now hang from magnets on my fridge.
Caring, fun and loving, 
She is eleven going on twelve.

Nov. 5, 2019 for Beth Evans' 2 To 12 Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Rodrigues Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 6:27 PM
Nice loving details from her Grandma! :) Congratulations, Andrea!
Na Avatar
November 22, 2019 at 12:37 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Andrea
Seal Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 5:29 PM
It's great watching them grow up and I know what you mean by them rather being with others lol, talking of youthfulness are you related to Bengamin Button, you seem to get younger with each new avatar :) Take care, Richard
Horne Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 2:41 PM
lovely write, my friend
Anish Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 8:24 AM
What a sweet looking, pretty young woman! You must be very proud! Nice family - oriented poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Pandit Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 8:22 AM
Oh, the joy of grand kids! Every verse paints an image of love for family--many can relate to--well written, Andrea.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 4:54 AM
A wonderful poem of a beautiful girl. I love it so... Blessings, Gina
Allison Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 4:51 AM
such a touching poem Andrea - wish i had grandkids to write about, beautiful picture to match a beautiful poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Krutsinger Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 8:34 PM
She sounds lovely for sure!
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