Snickers Bar

a chocolate snickers bar
                                                   very delicious
                                            with peanuts and caramel
                                                 it's such a delight
                                                   just to bite into
                                                    its greatness
                                                         yum
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 5:14 PM
"yum" !!!! ya got me chuckling! raven! ...can imagine you presenting this "spoken word!"
Guzzi Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 11:38 AM
one of my favorites...I love how the caramel pulls! Light & Love
Neese Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 7:12 AM
haha yum thanks raven didnt know you were in poetry soup
Wilson Avatar
March 30, 2009 at 12:57 PM
Yes I like snickers bars as well. Like this one. Leon
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