Jack Ellison Poet Narrative

Sneezing Feels So Good

When we sneeze it feels oh so good

When someone next to you sneezes

And you didn't have an advanced warning 

It's like your head almost blows off your shoulders!

It a natural bodily function just like some others

Which I won't mention at the moment

For fear of being banished from the site

But youse guys know what I mean

Like burping and farting... oops!

That's surely going to get edited out!

Why is it that something so natural

And feels so good can be so annoying

Sometimes life just isn't fair!



© Jack Ellison 2014

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Jan Allison December 8, 2014 at 2:55 PM made me smile my dear brother jack - guess when we lose control of our bodily functions that's when we have to worry! Hugs jan xxx Jack Ellison December 8, 2014 at 5:17 PM Sneezing is the least of our problems!!!! Love from Brother Jack XXXX

Carol Eastman December 8, 2014 at 11:52 AM Hey! You don't live with a Dragon, Do you? You might say: A sneeze is worth a thousand fires! When he sneezes we holler 'Fire in the Hole' and that's if we're inside. Outside is 'Run for your lives!' I've seen him take out a tree at 60 paces! Unbelievable! Thank goodness Dragons don't get colds! We all have something to be thankful for now, don't we. After all, a cold sneezing fit could actually create Global Warming! LOL! I guess you're not part Dragon after all or you would know this. Jack Ellison December 8, 2014 at 5:16 PM Love to sneeze... actually have blown Cathie clear across the room!!! She wasn't injured though! LOL XXX Carol Eastman December 8, 2014 at 11:54 AM PS. I won't tell Dragon that you're not one... It would break his heart. A Dragon Santa is at the top of his list of every thing COOL! Now me. I'd say everything hot with every sneeze he takes... LOL