Black Eyed Susan Poet Limerick

Sneaky Ninjas

Black ninjas under the moonless sky
Strike raw fear in their enemies white
They dye their eyes black
As ink to attack
Like demons rising out of the night!


11/5/11
Received 3rd place in "sneaky ninjas" contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown November 17, 2011 at 5:19 AM Congratulations on your win with your "Ninja Limerick" poem Susan. Love, Carol

Bl Devnath November 13, 2011 at 6:34 AM Congrats for win. Thanks, bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 11, 2011 at 8:50 PM Congrats Susan on a super win with this wonderful ninja Limerick luv..

Gwendolen Song November 11, 2011 at 6:42 PM Susan~~~ninjas in the black of night...what a scary sight..congrats on this most excellent entry. Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich November 11, 2011 at 9:34 AM Hey, Susan, way to go. I see you won the ninja contest! I snuck mine in at the VERY last moment. no joke! A big congrats to you!!

Bob Quigley November 11, 2011 at 8:39 AM Nice one Susan. Congratulations on your win. in PD's contest

Poet Destroyer A November 11, 2011 at 12:53 AM SUSAN~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, for your super ninja entry. Thank you for supporting my Sneaky Ninja contest* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich November 7, 2011 at 10:04 PM Good imagery limerick!! That was funny about the smart phone, Susan, that your dad had to take a class. Where can I find that class? hahaha

Jack Horne November 6, 2011 at 7:07 AM LOL, witty piece, Susan

Poet Destroyer A November 5, 2011 at 9:17 PM SUSAN, THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING MY CONTEST,..P.D.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. November 5, 2011 at 10:28 AM oh, very sneaky indeed, Susan! I really liked how you described their stealth here & so cool, for some reason, I just imagine those eyes widening in fear... :D