Snapshot

As I took a mental snapshot of the moon lit night
I thought of my father, as the stars shined bright




11-21-16
Alexis Y

how i feeli lovecrystalline

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Afzal Nusker

December 11, 2016 at 1:05 PM

Lovely poem.

Alexis Y.

December 11, 2016 at 1:15 PM

Hi Afzal, Thank you so much, I appreciate that you saw it as lovely:-) Alexis

Patrice Trice Jackson

November 27, 2016 at 12:03 AM

I love this poem Alexis... Beautifully done...

Wilma Neels

November 23, 2016 at 1:13 PM

Alexis, this is a beauty.. such a lovely thought ;-)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

November 22, 2016 at 2:35 PM

A very loving poem, Alexis. Did you frame that snapshot? Vivid image frozen in the sky. Good poetry here. Love and many blessings.

Daniel Turner

November 22, 2016 at 10:58 AM

Really sweet thoughts, Alexis.

Paloma P

November 22, 2016 at 7:01 AM

Touching and ethereal Alexis. Such a moving sentiment. Did you mean 'lit', just wondering, 'lite' reminds me of beer. :)

Paloma P

November 22, 2016 at 7:58 AM

Anytime my poetic friend, the pleasure was mine. :)

Alexis Y.

November 22, 2016 at 7:07 AM

Hi Paloma, Thank you so much for that wonderful comment. Yes I did mean "lit". It's already changed. Thanks: -)Alexis

Eileen Manassian

November 21, 2016 at 7:49 PM

How sweet, dear. Hope you can pull out that mental snapshot often are relive the moment and feel the connection. Hugs

Chris Green

November 21, 2016 at 5:34 PM

Beautiful Alexis, I can feel your heart beating in this wonderful piece Though there is a touch of sadness it is overshadowed by the love expressed in your words.