Snapshot

You sized me up
with limited vision
made your decision
about who I am-
on fleeting impressions
made in mere seconds
wrong as can be, but
you don't give a ____!

At which moment
did shutter click
in what second
was I seen?

(Was I caught
in awkward elegance-
a wistful sigh
an angry glance
at my worst
or at my best
or somewhere in-between?)

How did you define
or classify me?
...could you confine
or categorize me?

If you had taken
more than one
shot of me-
you would surely
contradict yourself.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 2:34 AM
Two of my best pals ever gave me such a scary first impression, I avoided them and ran from them! I knew there was something different, and I did not want to stick around and find out what. When I did, I was the one who felt weird. Maybe I knew them from a former life? I have no idea, but they both became forever friends in the end, when I got smarter.
Mcferran Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 2:08 PM
It's so strange how that happens... most of the time, my intuition is pretty spot-on when I meet people in-person, but every once in a while it goes on the fritz and I totally misread them.
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 10:27 AM
This is so true. Of how we size people up without really getting to know them. I did that to a girl who became one of my best friends after I had formed a negative opinion of her at first!
Mcferran Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 11:30 AM
Funny how we all hate this when it's done to us, but it's so easy to inflict on others... I've been guilty of it, too. :(
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