Snakebite

I was listening to electronic music,
And i could see peaks and troughs of the beats,
With my mind hand i reached out and caught it,
A real live wire,
Then i recoiled in shock,
An electric bite from the thousand year snake.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 20, 2010 at 9:34 AM
as one soul speaks to another. captivating work. thank you, chuck
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