Rhoda Tripp Poet Alliteration

Snake Sirloin

Serenading with sermons at services,
Serious seraphims searched out self-serving serpents.
But serrated silver certainly surpasses serenity.
Sirloin snake steaks seared and served by servants.


Written 11/26/17
for Barry Stebbings/Alliteration Contest

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Jan Allison December 30, 2017 at 6:00 PM Fabulous alliteration Rhoda I like steak but sizzling snake's not to my taste lol:-) Hope you have a wonderful new year and my best wishes for 2018:-) hugs jan xx Rhoda Tripp December 30, 2017 at 11:56 PM Thanks, Jan. There aren't too many foods I wouldn't try, and very few I dislike (limburger cheese tops the list of the unsavory) but I've never eaten snake. Id be willing. I love turtle and frog legs. :))

Silent One December 23, 2017 at 1:10 PM Thats great alliteration... I think some may and may not agree with your sentiments... Rhoda Tripp December 25, 2017 at 11:11 AM Thank you, Silent. No offense intended here. Purely fiction and does not imitate the sentiments of the writer. Lol.

Paul Callus December 8, 2017 at 2:26 PM You have a vivid imagination, Rhoda:) Enjoyed this alliteration with a smile...I have no doubt you wrote it with a big grin on your face! A pity both our entries did not slide into the finals:) Regards // paul Rhoda Tripp December 8, 2017 at 3:21 PM Thank you, Paul and I did. Lol. As for our entries, there will be a next time. :)

Edward Mccall November 28, 2017 at 9:35 AM Now that's deep, I get it, A nice alliteration. Rhoda Tripp November 28, 2017 at 12:50 PM My muse takes me places I don't even want to go. lol

Richard Lamoureux November 28, 2017 at 7:42 AM You did this very well. Your theme slithered along quite well. Thanks for visiting my latest poem, l look forward to hearing more of your thoughts. Rhoda Tripp November 28, 2017 at 8:08 AM Thank you and most certainly...I will continue browsing.

James Swartz November 27, 2017 at 4:56 PM Ssssoo wonderful. This is quite humorous and nicely finished. And now I'm hungry for steaks Rhoda Tripp November 27, 2017 at 9:02 PM Lol. Thanks so much, James. Much appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues November 27, 2017 at 5:55 AM Nicely done, Rhoda! :) I like your theme. Rhoda Tripp November 27, 2017 at 6:41 AM Thanks, Kim. Lol. Just a bit of my off the wall humor in this piece. First alliteration I've written. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks again.