William Kelii Kekaula Poet Haiku

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Snake

*Image of Snakes & Reptiles by Pixabay.

snake

scales slither and slide
stealthily seizes poor sap~
sleeps with shared sights shed

2022 April 12
*5th Place*
Wild Animal Haiku
~~Tania Kitchin: Judged 2022 April 18

HMS & PS; 5,7,5

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Paula Goldsmith April 20, 2022 at 11:02 AM Congratulations on your "snake" Haiku win. Wonder what your picture is thinking. Have a blessed day writing away....................... William Kelii Kekaula April 20, 2022 at 11:36 AM Awake or asleep, Paula, methinks distance is best, and a hearty thank you my friend, Aloha~William

Andrea Dietrich April 19, 2022 at 2:51 PM Great SSSS alliteration here!! Congrats, William. William Kelii Kekaula April 19, 2022 at 6:08 PM An enjoyable wild sound-off, Andrea, and my compliments on your giraffe--luv the pic my friend, Aloha~William

Christuraj Alex April 18, 2022 at 9:00 PM Great alliteration. Beautiful imagery. Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula April 18, 2022 at 10:00 PM Acceptance that purposeth pleasantries, Christuraj, appreciate your integrity my friend, Aloha~William

Tania Kitchin April 18, 2022 at 8:58 AM William, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku! William Kelii Kekaula April 18, 2022 at 11:57 AM Thanks, Tania, 'twas fun my friend, Aloha~William

Valsa George April 12, 2022 at 8:13 PM Be ready for another win ! Excellent alliterative haiku .... dear William ! William Kelii Kekaula April 12, 2022 at 9:20 PM Your generosities, Valsa, are a blessed boost my friend, Aloha~William

Kim Rodrigues April 12, 2022 at 6:07 PM Great alliteration! William Kelii Kekaula April 12, 2022 at 9:17 PM Thank you, Kim, most welcoming truly my friend, Aloha~William