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'smothered No More'

Bounded by fear - Do you still remember that? When I would build my walls; I would let no one in I would look for ways to cut them off Especially those who got too close Do you remember when I said? It was for their own good In the meantime you knew it was the fear talking Afraid of the consequences Feeling that if I let them in, They might be hit by misfortune I never thought it would come to this I never thought the fear would dissipate – Replaced by faith Replaced by the knowledge That everything that happened Had to happen In order for me to let go To stop myself from stifling my growth I needed to embrace the pain, Embrace the laughter, Even the fear of losing loved ones I needed to let go – I needed to experience the hurt I needed to experience the joy I needed to experience the fear I needed to fail, I needed to fall So I can stand today Knowing that no matter what happens My mind, My body And My soul Is ready to go on – That fear can be toppled by faith If I focus on me Focus on today and not on my past ©142704092013

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Date: 7/20/2016 7:12:00 AM
Refreshingly honest and brutally frank with yourself and that's victory and growth. Thanks for showing us ththat
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Wilma Neels
Date: 7/20/2016 7:15:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by on my side as well.. will be checking out some of your other writes ;)
Date: 2/11/2016 6:38:00 AM
I was looking through my favorite poems and got to enjoy this one again.
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Date: 4/4/2015 7:30:00 PM
Wilma, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 9/28/2013 2:11:00 PM
Wilma, this is such well written and deeply felt introspection. I totally relate to all of it :) Congrats on your win
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Date: 9/27/2013 8:30:00 PM
congratulations Wilma... xox~ Linda
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Date: 9/25/2013 12:28:00 PM
I can really relate to this completely. This poem is very inspirational and powerful. A very enjoyable poem to read! Congratulations on your win, as well! Wonderful work, Wilma!...Thank you so much for the kind comments. I really appreciate it!
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Date: 9/25/2013 8:18:00 AM
So well expressed, congratulations.
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Date: 9/24/2013 4:53:00 PM
So here it is again on the winners list where it deserves to be. BIG congrats, Wilma
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Date: 9/24/2013 9:58:00 AM
I believe everything happens for a reason and shapes us in to who we are today...your poem is well written, congrats on your win...
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Date: 9/24/2013 9:30:00 AM
So introspective and self discovery in every line! I love this Wilma!! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/24/2013 9:02:00 AM
Wilma!!! You placed 7th on my contest! I had a sense this was you. :) A lot of vulnerable power resounds loudly in this writing. A strong focus on the "need" of emotional security & positive outcomes from all the risks. Wonderful job! =D
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Date: 9/18/2013 9:38:00 AM
This is a Masterpiece!!!!
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Date: 9/11/2013 5:06:00 AM
A\S YOU BUILD A WALL YOU DREW A BEAUTIFUL PIECE
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Date: 9/9/2013 5:28:00 PM
I love the wisdom and honesty that permeate this piece. Straight to my favorites.
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Date: 9/7/2013 4:01:00 PM
amazing poetry Wilma, love the message, and yes only use the past to build strength for the future...
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Date: 9/5/2013 5:44:00 AM
This is a fearless write in of itself my friend! I loved the way you wove the intricacies all throughout your poem! I really loved reading this immensely wonderful poem here this morning! Sorry I've been away, Just got some bad news! But I will persevere! Awesome Work!!
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Date: 9/4/2013 9:07:00 AM
very wise and wonderful!
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Date: 9/4/2013 9:01:00 AM
Very nice thought with a message Focus on today and not on my past
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Date: 9/4/2013 8:13:00 AM
Spot on, Wilma. Water your own roots in order to grow & stand tall.
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Date: 9/4/2013 7:56:00 AM
VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITTING
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Date: 9/4/2013 7:51:00 AM
wow, what a powerful message of having faith and being strong to face things and just move on. A very wise poem.
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Date: 9/4/2013 6:48:00 AM
"Focus on today and not on my past !!!!!! " that's right thoughts, Wilma ! - Sending you lots of love and big hug ! - Well written, my friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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