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Smoothing of a Name

Life becomes weighted
as stones are placed upon the backs of men, 
till they bend.
Pain from the weight makes us curse away 
pain makes us pray-pray away.
pain welds a frown to the face.
Eventually they will all go away
nobody likes to breathe in another's pain.

A smile is a pigmented trough 
where nuggets of life are often caught
shining like Gods cavity and everything is ok
until the next wave takes the nuggets away.

Life is weighted.
Even in death they weight your name with stones
which is forgotten by the weight of 
time-
In time your name fades away
into the cool blue shadow of forgotten.
life is heavily weighted.

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Date: 12/15/2024 11:02:00 AM
Sometimes life can be weighty, wish we could all soar like eagles at times.
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