Seren Roberts Poet Acrostic

Smoldering Look

V enus arrives on shore graciously in a shell
E asily carried by breadth the sun gods expel
N ymphs greet her with a rich purple cloak
U ndulating roses their seed heads shook
S he covers her modesty with a smoldering look

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Cecilia Macfarlane November 28, 2012 at 7:59 PM Your acrostic blazes with sensuality....well done! Hugs Seren Roberts November 29, 2012 at 12:28 AM Thank you Cecila for stopping and commenting.....Seren

Andrea Dietrich November 27, 2012 at 1:53 PM that was really an interesting line from which you derived the title of your fine acrostic poem: She covers her modesty with a smoldering look. Love that! Seren Roberts November 27, 2012 at 2:39 PM lol dont know where it came from .......thanks for stopping by....Seren

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 27, 2012 at 6:54 AM Who's a clever girl then, I laugh at subtle, but clever yes. This is lovely xx Seren Roberts November 27, 2012 at 2:40 PM me isnt.... Thought I would have a go at this form. Wasnt sure if it was ok.. Seren

David Williams November 27, 2012 at 3:11 AM Seren excellent acrostic very subltly romantic...David Seren Roberts November 27, 2012 at 6:31 AM wow David me being subtle thats new on my poem scene......... Thanks for stopping by ........Seren