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Smoking is Injurious

"Smoking is bad, Out of fad", says my lad of eight Don't smoke again It does slain you Gives pain to us I do not bluff Said,"Enough!" Took a puff to think 26.02.16

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Date: 3/16/2016 7:40:00 AM
Than-Bauk written in style..Congrats on your winner..Sara
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/16/2016 10:51:00 PM
Thank you so very much. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 3/15/2016 5:46:00 PM
Bobby, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/15/2016 11:01:00 PM
Thanks Linda. XOX, Bobby
Date: 3/13/2016 7:05:00 PM
haha, that last one is funny!! Congrats for your win.
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/13/2016 9:16:00 PM
LOL! You know, previously we used to say by lighting a cigarette, " Let's fuel up the intelligentia", I have used that irony. xoxo, Bobby
Date: 3/12/2016 2:36:00 AM
Now that's irony! The parents teach the children ... until the children teach the parents. Well penned Than-Bauk and congrats on the win.
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/12/2016 7:16:00 AM
Yes, it happens every now and then. I have seen many telling children, "Don't lie!" and then mobile rang, answered, " Sorry, I am out of station". LOL! Thanks a lot, Tim, for your read and wonderful comment. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 3/11/2016 7:57:00 AM
Hi Bobby, at eight your son showed such wisdom. I liked the read my friend. Congratulations on your placement in this contest....Vlad.
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/11/2016 12:09:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Vlad. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 3/5/2016 11:05:00 AM
Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful....
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 3/5/2016 9:50:00 PM
Thanks a lot Funom. Happy to know that you have enjoyed it. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 2/26/2016 11:26:00 PM
am i to understand tht even after good advise frm your son, u still went and "took a puff to think"?.....Tell me i'm getting it wrong Bobby.
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 2/27/2016 12:14:00 PM
SSSorry Ma'am, You are right and I am wrong. Just see I am on my knees and folding my hands I am apologising in front of you all... I am a sinner ... Please, please forgive me... please... at least for the credit of writing a Than-Bauk and that too on human folly. Believe me, I don't have son, I have a daughter of seven and I have written this for the sake of rhyme only. Love and hugs, Bobby