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Smoking Gun

a perfect shot, to the head, trickle of blood, he is dead, the smoking gun, in my hand, justice done in lawless land, father of two, middle of street, his widowed wife, revenge sweet, ageing mother weeps for son, in my hand, the smoking gun! score is settled, bullet fired, job completed, I was hired, reason why, I do not know, nor the problem nor the row, feelings for him, I have none, in my hand, the smoking gun! shoot to kill, is what I do, paid to do without a clue, list of names in the docket, each dead man, fills my pocket, blame me not for what I do, curse me not that hell I rue, I hear the cops, time to run, In my hand, the smoking gun! man kills man in various roles, innocents dead, bleeding holes, soldiers kill on battle grounds, cops on streets, bullet sounds, gun kills people one by one, yet words can kill more than one, If our words and deeds are sweet, there won’t be guns on the street! another street, new job begun, In my hand, the smoking gun! 5th placement Written 27/04/2021 Guns Poetry contest Anthony Biaanco sponsored 7/8 syllables each line.

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Date: 5/18/2021 11:02:00 AM
Love the rhyme and rhythm. Congratulations Krish!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/18/2021 4:42:00 PM
Thanks very much, George! Delighted to have your visit and to make a new friend
Date: 5/11/2021 3:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a story/write. I love your line, "If our words and deeds are sweet, there won’t be guns on the street!" So True. Have a blessed day...................
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/11/2021 9:13:00 PM
Thank you Paula! Yes. Gun culture, is a savage culture! but it has become part of our civilisation!!
Date: 5/10/2021 8:42:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/11/2021 9:12:00 PM
Thanks Christuraj!!
Date: 4/28/2021 8:44:00 AM
You simply amaze me with your poetry. A winner for me. Truth, sad but true, when stomach is hungry, man is ready to do anything. Morals are only for well-fed. I loved your lines"gun kills people one by one, yet words can kill more than one, If our words and deeds are sweet there won’t be guns on the street!". Take care, enjoy your retirement! Rama
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/28/2021 9:17:00 AM
Rama, I am always delighted to get your feedback which is so positive and analytical at the same time! God bless you. :)

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