Smoking Gun

a perfect shot, to the head,
trickle of blood, he is dead,
the smoking gun, in my hand,
justice done in lawless land,
father of two, middle of street,
his widowed wife, revenge sweet,
ageing mother weeps for son,
in my hand, the smoking gun!
score is settled, bullet fired,
job completed, I was hired,
reason why, I do not know,
nor the problem nor the row,
feelings for him, I have none,
in my hand, the smoking gun!
shoot to kill, is what I do,
paid to do without a clue,
list of names in the docket,
each dead man, fills my pocket,
blame me not for what I do,
curse me not that hell I rue,
I hear the cops, time to run,
In my hand, the smoking gun!
man kills man in various roles,
innocents dead, bleeding holes,
soldiers kill on battle grounds,
cops on streets, bullet sounds,
gun kills people one by one,
yet words can kill more than one,
If our words and deeds are sweet,
there won’t be guns on the street!
another street, new job begun,
In my hand, the smoking gun!


5th placement
Written 27/04/2021
Guns Poetry contest
Anthony Biaanco sponsored
7/8 syllables each line.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Stathakis Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 11:02 AM
Love the rhyme and rhythm. Congratulations Krish!
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 4:42 PM
Thanks very much, George! Delighted to have your visit and to make a new friend
Goldsmith Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 3:43 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a story/write. I love your line, "If our words and deeds are sweet, there won’t be guns on the street!" So True. Have a blessed day...................
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 9:13 PM
Thank you Paula! Yes. Gun culture, is a savage culture! but it has become part of our civilisation!!
Alex Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 8:42 PM
Congratulations!
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 9:12 PM
Thanks Christuraj!!
Balasubramanian Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 8:44 AM
You simply amaze me with your poetry. A winner for me. Truth, sad but true, when stomach is hungry, man is ready to do anything. Morals are only for well-fed. I loved your lines"gun kills people one by one, yet words can kill more than one, If our words and deeds are sweet there won’t be guns on the street!". Take care, enjoy your retirement! Rama
Radhakrishna Avatar
April 28, 2021 at 9:17 AM
Rama, I am always delighted to get your feedback which is so positive and analytical at the same time! God bless you. :)
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