Smoking Good

He tossed the finished cigar in the bin,
Doctors for years have said it is a sin,
To blow your two lungs out in puffs of smoke,
Is as bad for you as using street coke!

He was advised to go for morning run,
quit cigars, be a vegetarian,
He ignored doctors, never took to track,
His doctors died! All of heart attack! 

He looked at himself in bedroom mirror,
The creases on his face caused him no fear,
He walked with shuffle but walked straight,
Not bad for a man one hundred and eight!

Date written 5/02/2020
Ist placement 
Line Gauthier
Contest Name	POLARITIES AND PARADOXES |
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Messina Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 8:30 AM
Well done, Krish. Congrats on your win! There an old saying... Sex might be great when your one hundred and eight, but heck...I won't participate (lol) Charlie
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 9, 2020 at 8:37 AM
Thanks Charles. Have not heard that one, but at that age a cup of tea will do fine! lol
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